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| "Concrete Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Sharpshooter_Hawkeye [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That was an extremely good fanfic! I have always loved Hinata, and I always will! Man, when Naruto wrote the word on the tombstone, that just made me star to cry SO HARD! *I can't see!* I took your advice, and listened to the song while reading to the fic, and you're right! It does add to the sadness to the fic! Job well done! *standing innovation* xoxo Sharpshooter_Hawkeye
| Title: whoa
Reviewed By: Zetsuke [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 18:49 CST
Comment/Review:
That was...amazingly tragic. A good fic (Hinata's emotional pain is very well described), but you should have added more depth to her relationships between her father and Naruto.
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