| "Dancing in the Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 10:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
You are planned to update, right? ^_~
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Title: Cool story!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha and Kagome Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY cool story. I don't really read many OC stories, but this one is good and I think its proved tobe my favorite one! I'm really interested to see where this is going, so please continue!:) PS: Ed when he is drunk was funny, if only we ever got a chance to witness it on the anime or manga (lol):)
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Title: recomendation
Reviewed By: Lust's sin On: March 09, 2006 15:44 CST
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I think that Edward relates with peolple that have suffered a lot or lost someone close to them like Rose have, in the case or Lyra they have alchemy, the wish to use it to help people is a bond for them. He relates to the characters but their stories are completly different. A character can come across the gate in diferent ways, like Hohenheim being sent by Dante, like Ed in an Equivalent Trade, or like the first time Ed saw london, just in body and mind taking control of his counterpart on that side of the gate. The last I think is more possible and is rarely used in a fanfiction. If you need any help you can contact me, my registered acount is DarkMikoKikyo.
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Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 20:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Drunk Ed, that a scence I hope to never see in the anime.
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Title: To Lust's Sin
Reviewed By: split personality fun [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 19:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah, I know. *sweatdrop* My intention wasn't to be cliched though. I needed a way for the two to bond without them having a relationship. This was the only way I could think of to do that. If you have any advice on how I can better things, please tell me. I'm all ears. ^^
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Reviewed By: Soruka On: February 28, 2006 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10 10 ALL THE WAY!!! I REALLY LOVE YOUR WRITING!!! PLEAZY PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORY SOON!!!!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Lust`s sin On: February 27, 2006 13:36 CST
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I think that Aeri`s history lacks imagination, It`s almost a copy of edwards with some diferent details. the writing is good but the fic in general feels so cliched
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Reviewed By: Uniasus(away from main comp) On: February 26, 2006 13:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice. I love how you already melted your OC and Ed together.
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