| "Final Christmas" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: xCarCrashHeartx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 03:19 CDT
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wow. you gave me quite a scare. i really thought sakura died! ..and i was all teary and sad during the chapters and it really touched my heart. that was a really well written story! even the journal-entry-format was quite effective and gave a special emphasis on their personal feelings. i loved the story quite much!
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Reviewed By: MOATI On: November 07, 2006 15:00 CST
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I fixed the problem now, but I'll stop spamming the board now. But truely great story! I'm trying to persuade all of my friends to read it (They're all animeists (If that makes sense)) but this is a story they MUST read! As for myself, I'm re-reading it! Makes me cry every time!
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Reviewed By: MOATI On: November 07, 2006 14:36 CST
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Is it just me or does it go straight from chapter two to chapter 5? O_o
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: MOATI On: November 06, 2006 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best fanfiction I've ever read! It was so sad but the ending was so beautiful! I tried really hard all the way through not to cry but cracked at chapter eight, lol. I loved it so much! Such great talent shouldn't go to waste! Get out there and write a book!!!
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Title: wONDERFUL
Reviewed By: Lina A Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVEDIT. tHOUGHT IT WAS VERY TOUCHING....CAN'T WAIT TIL THE NEXT STORY. TIL THEN, JA! ~ROSE-CHAN
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Title: DANG...
Reviewed By: Lina A Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, you had me going! I'm sitting here reading this getting all sad and about ready to cry, cause Sakura is dying, but then that ending? Criminy! That was a fast one pulled, that's for sure. I had to read the last few sentences, to make sure I had it right. I liked it alot. I wouldn't mind seeing more of your work. Please do continue, and I will see ya next story. Until then, JA! ~Rose-chan
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Reviewed By: The Black Crow On: August 03, 2006 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi..!!! You are SO evil!!xD You had me crying during ALL the story... just to give me the happy ending in the last paragraphs =) Anyway... I'm here to tell you that I really liked your story. It was beautifuly written. And it was amazing the way you could describe the feelings of each character... It really touched me, 'cause I had a pretty similar moment last year with my grandpa... tought it wasn't a happy end... Anyway, I really loved the way you wrote it... Went right to the heart ;) Keep Writing!!! Don't let such talent waste Byes
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Reviewed By: I AM SOMEONE HERE ME ROAR On: May 13, 2006 07:20 CDT
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Your story was pretty good accept your ending mad no sense. At all. Or i didn't get it a least. So if you could like i don't make that a bit clearer... yeah.
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Title: it's so sad
Reviewed By: lovely liz On: February 10, 2006 00:29 CST
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thats sad i dont want her to die *shead a tear* poor li, poor everyone! well so far is ok
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Reviewed By: BeautyandYue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let her live! please! by some miracle!
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Title: Final Christmas
Reviewed By: trixiecherryli On: February 03, 2006 08:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well,She should make it more specific idea about it.You're story is good and original but why is it about the people who say goodbye.You should be specific in your story okay.You're story is PRETTY GOOD and make it better.CAn you read my story please?Please write a review.Sayonara.My Id is Starlight_trixiecherryli
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