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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 16:18 CDT
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- storms accrossed house ranging about evil writers who love cliffhangers.- Please! Write more! I will not rest until I know who caught them!
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Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I love the connection between the general and Edward. Beauifully written, perfect grammar, and I'm glad you add some comedy here and there. I can't wait for the next chapter. Fanfiction writers who can actually write are, unfortunately, somewhat rare and I only hope I can come close to your level with some more practice. I hope you're considering pursuing some kind of a writing career, because it would be a shame if you didn't. Pat yourself on the back, you really know what you're doing and this story is one of, if not the, best fanfictions I've read.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll say it again - you are an amazing writer. This story is so well-written that it's made me read a genre I don't even like that much and enjoy it immensely. Keep up the good work! This story is amazing!
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Reviewed By: katgirlofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2006 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's sad, but also sweet. And Roy licking Ed's shirt was hilarious, plus Ed's reaction to it! Thank you!!! Please update again soon! ~Kat
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 21:03 CST
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Noo! It ended...this makes me sad...I really like this fic, please write another chapter? ^_^
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Reviewed By: Shinkei On: March 03, 2006 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is good, some of the grammar and sentence fluency needs some work. ButI enjoyed it. Is there going to be another chapter?
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Title: YEAH!!!
Reviewed By: Acidic Creature On: February 28, 2006 18:32 CST
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Holy Crap that was amazing!!! Please keep up the good work!!! Oh, and write more!!
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Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 15:47 CST
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are you going to update soon? I hope so because I want more of this story. It's written extremely well and it's hilarious so please update!!
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Title: I get it!
Reviewed By: x_x_Sesshoumaru_x_x [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 23:24 CST
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"Yes . . . I tell him all the time not to speak with a full mouth . . . but he never listens." That one line made me laugh so hard.....heehee.....*sigh* Can't wait for more!!! xD
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Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's strange because I normally hate RoyxEd fics, but for some reason I decided to read this one and I laughed my ass off. You're an amazing writer and this story is hilarious. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: cryo On: February 16, 2006 21:55 CST
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XD I am so very amused by this. Especially the 12 days of Christmas line that was comedic gold...and the whole situation in general. Poor Ed, having to be diplomatic... And curse you, I really want to know why Ed fell out of his chair now ;_; Will there be any more of this soon? Pretty please with sugar on top?
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Title: Loving it
Reviewed By: x_x_Sesshoumaru_x_x [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like I said before, I'm loving the plot. And you're a very talented writer, great choice of words! :)
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Reviewed By: KimmyT3 On: February 05, 2006 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! this seems like it will be a wonderful story and i hope you update! its really interesting for the first chapter and i haven't read a story where you get to meet roys parents!
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Reviewed By: x_x_Sesshoumaru_x_x [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 22:35 CST
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I like the plot! Continue writing!!! xD
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