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Title: I Loved It!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 14, 2008 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of those fics that you think back on and remeber fondly. Im happy I found it and got to enjoy it, beautifully written and much fun. I love Roys' name meanings tehee! A wonderful read with my highest ratings. Looking forward to more of your work, until then, ja!
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Reviewed By: cryo On: June 25, 2006 06:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Awww...the ending was perfect. The way the homophobic, stiff-necked father had to start just with ACKNOWLEDGEMENT - that was really well done. And the mother and sister getting over it was awesome too, and and...yeah. So much love for this :)
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Shinu 13th Sage Sage of Pain(Not signed it... isht too lazah-_-;) On: June 25, 2006 02:57 CDT
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That was a really good story! I liked it. You should write on more subjects, say... Inuyasha, Ranma 1/2, and other such things. What I think would be interesting is if someone did a story about Reboot. But those are just some ideas!
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Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 01:36 CDT
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Awww, it's over. Well, I must congragulate you. I thourougly enjoyed this story (I think I've already made that quite clear) and hope for more stories from you in the near future (as well as the rest of Levitas Fragosus). Good luck with your writing.
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Reviewed By: Tsumora (Not logged in) On: June 23, 2006 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly LOVED it. You're a fantastic writer, and I hope you write some more stories! I'd love to read them. You're truly talented, so keep it up! :)
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Reviewed By: milkytoast On: June 07, 2006 04:42 CDT
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*holds out a flower* Damn, am I ever glad to see this fic updated! It's one of the few fics I will brave mediaminer for :) I like how Roy's mother codeswitches into Xingian when she's upset, and how the Major General is still being difficult and there WASN'T just a magical "oh, it's cool" scene, and and...please write more? Pretty please?
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: Shinu 13th Sage Sage of Pain(Highly likely that I am not logged in.. Have updated FMW, with descriptions... kinda..) On: June 03, 2006 01:19 CDT
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That's a strange twist... but somehow, I kinda guessed that the sister wouldn't be able to keep it to herself. It's just part of the way she is. Soo... That was really great! Thanks for updating! Update again soon! Much fun! Shinu-chan
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Reviewed By: kiori, not signed in On: June 02, 2006 14:42 CDT
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You know, if the anime ever did go deeper into Roy's history, your version would make perfect sense. How his dad forced him in the military and all that, and just the way you've portrayed his family, it seems like it would fit well. I really hope everyone can call a truce at the end, I'm curious to see where you go with this. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: Shinu (Probably not signed in! -.-) On: April 23, 2006 19:22 CDT
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LURVES! Squee! Must have more! Pwease?
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan(Not Logged In) On: April 23, 2006 10:41 CDT
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It's me! I swear it! Wow...That was....brutal... I loved it! I was really waiting for Ed to pull out some of his famous alchemy and sick it on Roy's father, and even though you didn't, I wasn't disapointed with the chapter. I liked the small bit of fluff that made it's way into the brutality of this chapter, and I loved how it was thrown into the Major General's face. It was awsome. I am kind of sad that Roy's mom and sister have to choose sides now, they seemed really cool. I just have to wait for the next chapter to find out what happens. Ja!
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Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 03:03 CDT
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the major general = homophobic bastard. But a very accurate rendition of how a man like him would react to finding out his son is gay. This was one intense chapter. Man, poor Roy. All I can say is you've got me rooting for a couple I never really liked. That alone is proof enough that this story is a must read. Once again, can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Nejispork On: April 21, 2006 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg it would be great if they were caught by Roy's father, as sadistic as that is of me. XD I can't wait till the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: x_x_Sesshoumaru_x_x [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2006 22:06 CDT
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GAH!!! Cliffhanger!!!!! >.< lol It's so beautifully written. Keep up the fantasitic work, and update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: Shinu On: April 07, 2006 23:37 CDT
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Oooh... If it's Roy's dad, they're so DEAD! Please update soon.
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Title: Busted!!!
Reviewed By: kiori, not signed in On: April 07, 2006 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, that really sucks for Roy and Ed but it sure provided me with some priceless amusement. What can I say that I haven't already? Another wildly entertaining chapter. I don't mean to rush you but I reeeeally need to know who caught them. This is gonna be good... (You're welcome, by they way. There's no way I could read stories like yours and not comment)
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