| "Automail" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Shinu 13th Sage Sage of Pain(not logged in and lagging in chapters! -_-;;;;) On: July 25, 2006 23:06 CDT
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O.o~ Wow... Amazing. Simply amazing! YOu're magnificent! I love it! Thank you, thank you, thank you! Keep up the magnificent work!
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Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 01:21 CDT
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Poor Ed...that had to suck. You really had me laughing at the whole miniskirt/Havoc incident. Nice job.
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Reviewed By: Bronwyn On: May 11, 2006 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The stories were all wonderfully written and very creative. My personal favourites have to be 'Dare', 'Thunder' and 'Property'...anyways, bravo and a round of applause to you. 'Automail' was also very sweet.
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Reviewed By: Bronwyn On: May 11, 2006 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Th stories were all wonderfully written and very creative. My personal favourites have to be 'Dare', 'Thunder' and 'Property'...anyways, bravo and a round of applause to you.
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Reviewed By: Shinu 13th Sage Sage of Pain(Not signed in, but FMW was updated fairly recently...) On: May 09, 2006 12:14 CDT
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Nifty! I like! These are fun to read. I hope there're more to come!
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Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny how something so simple can have such a big effect on someone. This was very cute and enjoyable. It would be fun to see this one animated, Ed's expression right before the kiss and after he rushed out sounded priceless. Great job, as usual. I hope you keep writing these drabbles, they're so fun to read and wonderfully written.
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: SnakeCharmerFoxx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 23:02 CDT
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I love these -very good expression of sentiments....great work!!!
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Title: Aww!
Reviewed By: Shinu(Still not logged in. -.-) On: April 23, 2006 19:35 CDT
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You really ought to write more of these! They're fun to read! I like them,and I despise RoyxEd fics... I guess the real truth is that you make us feel what they do. These are great! Keep up all your work and update soon, please!
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Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 02:43 CDT
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awwwwww!!!!! That's so like Ed to tell him while he's asleep. I love these mini stories, they're so awesome. Hope you add some more.
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Reviewed By: Kiori (too lazy to log in) On: March 29, 2006 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeez, poor Roy. This was really good, I hope you keep writing more of these stories. You really do a great job of writing the way the characters react to certain emotions and reminders of the past.
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Reviewed By: kiori [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 17:39 CST
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Honestly, why the hell don't you have more reviews? As expected from you all three stories were very well-written. The first one was quite touching and the second two had me laughing my ass off at the end. People obviously don't know good writing when they see it, because this deserves a lot more acclaim than a lot of stories I've read that are overrated. Keep up the good work. (After reading 'Family' and wishing I had more of your stuff to read I finally realized I was being an idiot and I could click on your name to see if you had any more stories. And whaddya know, I found two more ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lovin the cuteness On: February 08, 2006 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it you really got into his head. very very good. I am impressed
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