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| "Interdementional Travel" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: The return of Random /b/ tard
Reviewed By: TMcCaine [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anonymous doesn't forgive, and neither do I. This script is full of fail and lack of effort. I have read several script based stories, and have only done so because they held a quality that drew me to them. Scripts fail because they hold no originality or quality to their own. They have no standard and are the bustards of the internet writing style. Script, or playwright, styles are admirable and natural styles of writing, but you sir have even failed to adhere to those styles. Effort comes from the expression of imagination and it is much more than dialogue. Please dear (sexually ambiguous) define your intents with direction, stage direction. EFFORT MAN! There is no draw here, its blank, its uncolored; it's a stick figure with ink blobs. I don't want to hurt your feelings or call you terrible, I just want to say that playwrights have a style and format of their own which you do not follow. Look up the format and examine where they are going because without a format we as readers become lost in your contextual ambiguity.
| Reviewed By: Anonymous~Desu On: April 05, 2006 03:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
advice: stop writing in script, it hurts everyones eyes. offense: if this could even be called a story is something that i shall leave to the judgement of someone that feels like being a little bit more analytical than i do at the moment. offence/saddeningly undeniable fact: all that i will say is that this shoddily put together work of yours is only another piece of evidence towards the mounting case that there is a serious lack of effort to be found on mediaminer as of late. honest opinion: this is terrible. truth: ANONYMOUS DOES NOT FORGIVE remember all of this well, and try harder next time.
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