| "Fix You" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: swissdots On: June 15, 2008 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! Rakushun is so thoughtful and intelligent... nothing like the dopey country bumpkin that most people portray him as. Very well done, and great use of emotions. My heart is breaking for him
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Reviewed By: Aditu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 06:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this, finding good Juuni Kokki fanfics is a difficult thing. Especially ones that don't harbor a Keiki/Youko (which I can't picture happening). I loved how you portrayed Rakushun, while he's very intelligent and observant when it comes to his relationship with Youko he gets a little flustered, lol. Very well done and I would love to see you do a full scale Rak/Youko fic someday. Thank you for sharing this with us, it's beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 18:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Well written and I liked Rakushun's POV but was hoping for some Rakushun/Youko fluff.
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Reviewed By: Trinity_Destler On: February 15, 2006 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you for writing Youko/Rakushun!
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