| "The 1st Son Daughter???" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Reviewed By: Leoavery [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2010 08:00 CDT
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update soon before I go Super Saiyan myself and rip out your heart in a testament to the Fatality.
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Title: starting to give up on ever getting an update
Reviewed By: Update soon please On: August 01, 2009 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know the longer you take to update the more readers start to give up on your story and you can eventually lose them. So the sooner you update the happier your readers will be. Update soon please! I still haven't given up on you completely yet. So update please!
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Reviewed By: T-T On: May 23, 2009 18:24 CDT
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It's been over five mounths what's up? Once again you leave us (your loyal and dedicated readers) with a cliffy? How meeaannn! (T-T) Update soon please? (and all will be forgiven again) (^_^) update soon please?
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Title: Update pllzzzz
Reviewed By: Melliieeeeee On: February 13, 2009 10:14 CST
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update! update ! PLEEEAAASSSEEE! :'(
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update! But can u add more romance wit trunks and Minako i would like to see more of dat.. the action and fighting scenes r great but can we add more romance plz..
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Title: When man when!
Reviewed By: mell479-3qre On: December 29, 2008 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great writing! will trunks and minako get together? and if so when?! i cant take it!
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Reviewed By: PrinceVegetasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 18:20 CST
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oooo...what happened to Minako? *needs new chapter* X3
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Reviewed By: not logged in currently On: November 06, 2008 19:07 CST
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I have just one word for chapter 46... Hilarious!
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Reviewed By: PrinceVegetasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 20:34 CST
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omk YESH XD *rofls* that was an outstanding chapter...i cou;dn't stop laughing XD HAZZAH X3
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Reviewed By: PrinceVegetasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2008 10:00 CST
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goku's cooking...oh mai...O.O i fear for all of the sons health XD
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Reviewed By: PrinceVegetasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 19:42 CDT
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OMK poor ChiChi! XD nice chapter, can't wait for more ;p
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Reviewed By: PrinceVegetasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 17:42 CDT
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nice, another chapter! :3 i can't wait for more!!! ;3
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Title: YAYAYAY!!!
Reviewed By: PrinceVegetasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IT'S A MIRACLE!!! YOU UPDATED!!! HALLELUYA!!!!! O.O XD *dies* oh my kami, you don't know how happy i am that you updated, i was getting worried you discontinued the story XD well, glad you're back, and can't wait for more! :3
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Reviewed By: ---no name --- On: June 04, 2008 20:05 CDT
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Okay! Still no update even though it's been over a YEAR!!! I mean come on at least give an explination (and when about or if you even plan to update) to your loyal readers.
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Reviewed By: T-T On: May 25, 2008 15:24 CDT
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Oh my gosh it's so totally crule to write such a great story than leave your loyal reader (like me) hanging for over a year. I mean how mmmeeeeaaannnn! (crying rivers of tears) Update soon okay? Please? Pretty please with sugar on top?
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Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 20:38 CDT
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nuuuuuuu...no update over a yeeaaaarrrr *sobs*!! ~Vegeta's Mate and Lover for Life, Veggie_Luva_101
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Reviewed By: anonymous... On: March 09, 2008 11:59 CDT
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Oh my gosh! In less then 8 days it will have been a year since you last updated. When are you going to update? Your story is very good and I want to know what happends next. So update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Foxx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Whats up it's been like almost a year since you updated come on this is such a great story so Update soon k?
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Reviewed By: ---no name --- On: October 24, 2007 16:34 CDT
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Please please PLEASE UPDATE!! It's been 7 mounths! Seven LOOOONNNG MOUNTHS! (Rivers of tears)UPDATE!!! PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: ---no name --- On: September 28, 2007 18:03 CDT
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*Pathetic sniffles* Please? PLEASE? Please update soon its been like almost 7 months. Seven loooooooonnnnng boooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrriiiiinnnnnnnggggggg months. So please update soon k? (and ignore my last review's type-o)
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Reviewed By: ---no name --- On: September 28, 2007 18:00 CDT
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*Pathetic sniffles* Please? PLEASE? Update soon its been like almost 7 months. Seven loooooooonnnnng boooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrriiiiinmmmmmmggggggg months. So please update soon k?
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Reviewed By: ???????? On: August 20, 2007 19:21 CDT
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PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE!!! It's been forever!!!
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Reviewed By: nessanessa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 13:44 CDT
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I LOVE THE STORY!!!! please update it soon for all the cute lil bunnies who are reading!!!!
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Reviewed By: nessanessa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 13:44 CDT
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I LOVE THE STORY!!!! please update it soon for all the cute lil bunnies who are reading!!!!
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Reviewed By: nessanessa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 13:44 CDT
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I LOVE THE STORY!!!! please update it soon for all the cute lil bunnies who are reading!!!!
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Reviewed By: (^_^) On: May 21, 2007 15:47 CDT
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Come on!!! Come on!!! It's been 2 months! Update already!.....I'm waiting!! (^_^)
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Reviewed By: lil rin On: March 02, 2007 11:33 CST
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I ran a search and was surprised to see you had actually updated - twice! Congrats on entering high school. A little advice. Take it DAMN seriously, work hard, and take as many AP classes as possible. If you work really hard and pass the AP tests, you get college credit. Meaning the less time you have to have demeaning jobs where people treat you like dirt and you work your butt off for little money.
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Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 21:06 CST
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no way! did you actully print her story ot, and are reading it for the third time now? i don't think so! wait...if we're both overly loyal fans, we shouldn't be fighting! we should be telling peoples to read this story!
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Title: From your #1 most loyal reader ever
Reviewed By: ??? On: February 10, 2007 12:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best story ever! oh! and Veggie_Luva_101 you are not nor will you ever be DPFan4Ever's most loyal reader, because I am #1!! (~_~)
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Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 09:56 CST
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whomever is THANKYOU, i am her most loyal reader...NOT YOU *twitch* *twitch*...wow, i;m finally going crazy on this story...CUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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