Title: KAWAI !!!
Reviewed By: princessflame91 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww!!! That was soo CUTE! I can't believe that you haven't gotten any reviews for this yet... Hmm... Well, I like how you write, though I would suggest putting more depth into the scenes. It's a bit too clear cut. Other than that, though, it was definately a good read! Keep it up! But don't take my writing for example, since I know that mine sucks. Well, my Furuba, at least. I'm starting a Gravitation now, which I personally feel is much better than my usual work so far. Oh, do you think that you could possibly beta it for me? It's okay if you don't want to. Well, that's it for now. Keep up the good work! Signed, PrincessFlame91
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