| "Requiem of the Living" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 19:22 CST
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This is a great story!! I really hope you continue it soon!
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Reviewed By: chako On: December 12, 2006 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u'r story is great.i hope u can continue the story until it's finish.PLEEEASE!!!i hope that sakura and naruto be 2gather at the end.
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Reviewed By: scion234 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aside from one or two spelling mistakes, this looks REALLY good. Well-rounded charecters, origonal story, all that good stuff. Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Crazy_Killa On: July 25, 2006 14:57 CDT
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this one is defenitly interesting ill give you that and i have to say that i like it. so please update but take your time and write a really good one that is worthy of this fic. ill be waiting cya
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Reviewed By: channy On: June 21, 2006 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoever didnt review this is stupid because this story kicks so much ass! Im also glad that its a NaruSakura story! Plese continue so i can see whos walking towards Hinata!
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Title: THE SHIZIT!
Reviewed By: vixypixy_no9(notloggedin) On: June 21, 2006 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU DAMN AS HELL BETTER KEEP WRITING BECAUSE YOU MADE THE TOP 20 NARUTO FANFICS LIST AT NUMERO 3 I DON'T WANT TO HAVE TO TAKE YOU OFF BECAUSE YOU ROCK MY DAMN SOX!!! THIS IZ DA SHIZIT DUDE!! KEEP IT UP BECAUSE I LOVE THE F-ED UP HINATA AND I WANNA SEE HER DO SOME BAD-ASS DAMAGE TO THE SCREWED UP FAMILY!!! OH YA, GREAT JOB AT THE PLOT, I LOVE THIS AND AM MAD AT ALL THE DUMB PEOPLE WHO DIDN'T REVIEW THIS AWESOMENESS THAT SEATS ITSELF ON MY COMPUTER SCREEN!!! MY RATING-100 OR MORE!!!! P.S. Create a fanfic dictionary that all us could use because you are great at that!!!
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Reviewed By: FreetodrinkSR12 On: March 25, 2006 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying these one to. I read your gauriden story to. I hope you work on this one more though. Please update soon. 'CHOW'
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Reviewed By: Ochibi-chan On: February 13, 2006 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations on your first chapter. It was well written and it is obvious that you care about the quality of your work from the basics such as spelling to keeping a very professional voice. I really appreciate the fact that you did your research and kept the characters in character. The only thing that I thought could have been improved was that you tried to think of too many different ways to identify the same character, but that should improve now that you've introduced their names. It was creative and compelling to read for something you claim you wrote in a brief period of time. I hope that you do invest a little thought into your story because you've already laid the groundwork for something that could be amazing (like what happened to Naruto's eye?). I was especially impressed that you wrote in such as way that people not familiar with the Narutoverse could understand it and yet fans could enjoy it without feeling the information was redundant. For me, reading this made me feel the wonder I felt when I was discovering the Narutoverse for the first time. In response to your author's note, please, please, be true to your story. Don't write in pairings just because that's what you think people want. And don't apologise for not having yaoi, write what makes sense. (I'll admit I like yaoi, but there's nothing worse than when it's forced and out of character) Your readers will stay with you as long as the story is strong and the characters are consistant. You seem like an experienced writer who already knows what I'm going to tell you, but I encourage you to write with an ending already in mind and to not let other readers dictate what you write and weaken the integrity of your story. It's hard work sifting through all the poorly written ones to find a good solid fan fic. I hope this turns out to be one of the gems. Good luck! I'll be looking for the next chapters!
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Reviewed By: BLeh! On: February 12, 2006 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
People hardly ever review on mediaminer,it can be a little itimidating, so dont worry, your story is excellent but you only seem to have one chapter up on mediaminer whilst you have two on fanfiction. I know thar be a lot of people who dont use fanfiction who want to know happens next. Keep it up!
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