Title: let me see
Reviewed By: winter silhouette [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay most of its good just try to keep it discriptive i like your poetry but im not fond of how it ends look at all these words: adore, lore, core, sore,whore(kiddin),before,tore,for, well you get it you could be like: caused even though you've numbed me inside and out some how my hearts still sore, because this time is not like befor, yes it is you i hate but your presistance i adore. you are a greart poet you just need a little poet coaching(lol) check out my poems!^_^
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