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"A Birthday Wish Come True" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: KAYLEIGH  On: June 13, 2007 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved this fic. It was very good although Ash seems a little out of character in the beginning. It is a little sappy but not to sappy for my liking. It creates a beautiful mental picture as you read it and everything about it is amazing. The fic itself is wonderful but i think you could have cut Max out of the story since he only says one or two things. GOOD JOB!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Demon of RHS [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 15, 2006 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved the way you wrote it it held the image That comes to mind when I read such things. The spelling and grammer was pretty good but I don't know much about english. I gave an 8 for creativity because it has been done before. It had the qualities that make reading fun which is why I gave you the 9. If you've read the rest you know why the overall rating is a 10
 Title: A Birthday Wish Come True
Reviewed By: Jonessa Salas  On: September 07, 2006 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice and romantic story.

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