| "Electricity and Metal Dont Mix" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Kacorait [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 21:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
WE HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!THAT WAS TOO SHORT!!!!!!!!WHY WOULD YOU WRITE SOMETHING SO POINT LESS?!?!?!?!?! LET ALONE PUT IT ON THE INTERNET!IF YOUR GOING TO PUT IT ON THE INTER NET MAKE IT LONGER!!!!!!! -HANNAH & CAT (A.K.A NEKO)
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Reviewed By: Mustang's Youkai On: August 08, 2007 13:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi. I just want this story to continue because you had me enrapture by the first sentence...(I'm so lame...lol)Anyways,please continue!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: anime shadow girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice! your story has quite the interesting twist! LMAO! "Electricity and Metal dont Mix"...or do they?!?!?!? you have a pretty good start! keep going!
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Reviewed By: Lola bunny On: February 21, 2006 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please right more! I love the story even if It's not making sense how Mustang and Hawkeye had a kid.
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Reviewed By: Izandria On: February 17, 2006 09:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading the little bit you posted. It's definitely creative and I would like to read more. You had a few typos for such a small bit, but it's not bad because everyone has those. I hope you post more because I'd like to see what's going to happen.
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: DeronsDemonGurl On: February 14, 2006 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good start for a story. If Denise is Riza & Roy's child I think her shooting might take after her mom. Well anyway I hope you write more. I think this is going to be a story. Especially if there are some lemons later on(Hint,Hint). Again keep writing and update soon. XD
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