Reviewed By: Katrina Kadabra [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2002 07:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
This isn't a bad start. My biggest suggestion would be write some more. You've got such a tiny part of your story here, you've barely drawn interest before it's over. But so far it's coming out to be a cute fanfic. Good luck to you! :) |
