| "Out of the Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Roronoa Zolo's Girl On: June 01, 2006 08:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is not a waste of time. I have read every last chapter of all your stories. They are all very good. I would hope you continue write. I would also hope you write a sequel.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: spookagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 10:27 CDT
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i say sequal... it rocks.
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Reviewed By: Okami_1love On: May 17, 2006 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story. I've never read a story even close to this one, which could be quite a surprise because I read a lot, and I mean A LOT!! It's really interesting and keeps me wanting to came back to read more. You you have improved in your small problem with spelling which might just have been typing errors on your part. This story really has me guessing a lot, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, it actually makes the story a lot better and makes me want to never stop reading so I can finaly figure out the answers to certain questions. I know i might be rambling a bit but I just want to finally say that this story is really great adn you should really put your heart into finishing it. And know that there's someoneout there who really appreciates your imagination and creativity and your magnificent talent in story telling. Your devoted reader, Okami_1love
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Title: AWSOME
Reviewed By: spookagirl On: March 27, 2006 11:33 CST
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u did awsome keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: monkeyray On: March 27, 2006 08:10 CST
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I really loved this chapter! You did well on the fight scene, and the ending was so good it made me sad! :D keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: monkeyray On: March 23, 2006 07:13 CST
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Yay, another chapter! ^_^ You did very well on this one too, and I'm glad it's not a big cliffhanger...small enough to make me curious, though. :D
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Title: WOW...
Reviewed By: spooka123 On: March 22, 2006 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that is the best fanfic i hav evr red. it is relly kool. u should like try to update evryday. this is fantastic.
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Reviewed By: Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 11:58 CST
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Okay, here is the reson til why i write here so much. I cant view the new reviews if I don't write something like this first. My computer is a bit fucked up =/
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Reviewed By: monkeyray On: March 20, 2006 06:01 CST
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it's fine, you can take as long as you like. it's your story! I was reading the end of the chapter, and I wondered why Anya didn't really get hurt during the fight...did she? I don't remember reading anything like that, and I'm curious...
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 03:30 CST
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It has been a bit hectic this week and I haven't got a chance to write anything but it is on its way =)
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Reviewed By: monkeyray9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 17:10 CST
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I think the only think you might want to fix is grammar, but otherwise this has been going very well. If you can, try to use a program like MSWord to fix your spelling and grammar mistakes. ack, a cliffhanger! I can't wait to find out what will happen! ^_^
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Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 13:11 CST
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thanks for the reviews this far, though there haven't been any critisism, thay have encouraged me to continue
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Title: -
Reviewed By: monkeyray On: March 13, 2006 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry I haven't had time to read lately...but I just got myself up-to-date! Chapter 17 is truely exceptional, and I enjoyed reading everything you added since my last reveiw. I hope that you won't get too discouraged during your writing. Good Luck!
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Title: Okay, here is the deal
Reviewed By: Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 14:56 CST
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I've noticed that there are some that have read the newer chapters. When you review, you don't even have to write anything. It really isn't that hard rate using the scale above here ^^ If its good enough too read but not to rate then I guess that I should just pack my stuff and leave, right? I still have my story, even if I don't write it down, in my head.
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Reviewed By: RoronoaGirl07 On: March 09, 2006 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love reading your story. Your writing is very interesting. I hope you keep writing because I love reading your story.
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