| "I Wonder...." Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: anime shadow girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this. please dont do rina naraku! please do rina and ed instead!! because i love ed!
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Reviewed By: ChiBunny On: June 17, 2007 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
my tummy hurts... badly
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Title: love the story
Reviewed By: animelover55 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love story.i think rina/ed(ed's so cute!!!!!!!!!) eclari/sessyor al and AD/inuyasha should b 2gether
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Title: oh and p.s.
Reviewed By: Alberiogurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 12:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Rina has ALOT of faults. 1) she secretly loathes herself and wants to die, and will prove this later. 2) The did the unforgivable human transmutation, and now, Envy will come back to haunt her. 3) she cursed; more on that when Cosette appears. 4) She is an assasin; over 2 million dead from her over her lifetimes. dur! How do you think everyone will react to that when they find out? use your oh-so-better-than-mine brains. I do not mean to be rude, but I even asked for you in my story not to critizise my charaters. I'm Making Rina be a goody two shoes with a gynormis dark side on purpose. People will be glad when I kill her off. it's all part of my master plan, so BACK OFF Loove, Albireo's Girl, Lycoris
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Title: ya i know
Reviewed By: Alberiogurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 12:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I know that. Im making her a mary sue on purpose. I'll kill her off later, and bring in a diff person. enven I, ME, hate Rina. So, the next main char, Cosette, will be much better. ^.^ I luv killing peeps off! hehe
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Title: wtf
Reviewed By: azncookie On: July 09, 2006 22:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
your character is too much of a mary sue. it ruins the WHOLE storyline. And you really shouldn't keep up this whole "mary sue" image Rina has going, cause it makes the story seem stuipd (like angel said) You need to make your characters have faults, so its more realistic, and like not extremely retarded.
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Title: stupid
Reviewed By: TheREALAngel!!! On: July 09, 2006 02:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is the stupidest story ever. How can rina be all those things?! ITS STUPID STUPID OH AND U SPELLED LOATHE WRONG IMBICILE!!! aghh the most STUPID story ever STUPID STUPID STUPID STUPID STUPID ETC. =] Oh and don't forget, that story was STUPID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! P.S. I'm better than you.
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Title: ALright!
Reviewed By: Alberiogurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 23:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
YA, I'm working on the 10th chap, however, I am away from the computer I upload the stories from, and will be till somewhere around july 28th or later. But dont worry about slow updating for that and maybe the next chap, for i am working on it by hand, and will type and upload as soon as i can.
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Title: i want more!!!!! >
Reviewed By: 2SEXY4U On: June 15, 2006 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are so good plz update soon!!!!!! well keep up the good work!!!!! ^^ or else!!!!!!!!! >< mwahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Please Update!
Reviewed By: BakaInu On: March 21, 2006 20:16 CST
Comment/Review:
When are you going to update cuz' I love this story! please wirte more soon!
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Title: !!!!!!!JULIA!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: numbuh1373 On: March 12, 2006 14:09 CST
Comment/Review:
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNCCCCCCCCCCEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSS SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GASP, FAINT, REPEAT! THE INCEST! IT BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UURNS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *dies 5 katrillion times* my character, elcairi...er...whatever the name is. seems kinda...too preppy o_o it scares me. and the incest...is like...!?@#W@?%!@?~!?!?EHE?EF!#$ *twitches* Must...destroy...
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Title: Ok
Reviewed By: Alberiogurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 18:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Thank you. I know Rina is surrunded by bishis, but she will never have any of them. *hint hint for the last chapter.* Anyways, i really appreciate your review.
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Reviewed By: Yatsuha On: March 05, 2006 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...this is VERY original...but it's just full of "ZONG EVERYBODY LUVS MEEEEEE!!!!!!1111111eleven" from your main character. The fact that she's constantly surrounded by the bishies of the anime world makes her look like a whore. Besides that, description needs some work (for some reason, I think a good story has to have 2000+ words per chapter x.x) By the way, it's "loathe" And I really don't care.
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