| "After The Journey, But a New One Gained" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: The whole thing
Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 22:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
AWWWW! That was so sweet! I loved how the kids asked about her nappie poo! So cute and sweet!
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Reviewed By: BlackRainbow576 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jandy you need to update on here! It's been what like 5 months!? C'mon now all you gotta do is upload the chapter lol. Well, I think. You already completed this on ff.net right? I'm too lazy to go check lol. But yeah you should really update cuz this is a good fic and you can't just leave everyone hanging with an evil cliffy lol. P.S. BEWARE OF CHUBBY MCFATASSES!!!!!!!!!!! P.S.S AND 20 CHINNED WONDERS!
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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: yusuke_kagome_yoko_4ever_31 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz make all the chapters longer. the suspence is literally killing me!
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Title: Wat?
Reviewed By: HieiLover177 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 17:01 CST
Comment/Review:
What r u confused on tell me so i can straigten things out!! sorry for the confusion
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Reviewed By: Hieiluver05 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 22:31 CST
Comment/Review:
I must agree with Heartstar, I to am very confused about what you wrote, But it was good start so update soon.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm confused can you update soon that way I can se more of what you are saying I like the primis btw.
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