| "The Mercenary" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 17:48 CST
Comment/Review:
this is interesting so far. please update soon.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: Angel A Sasuke Lover On: April 30, 2006 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep wrighting it is cool but i didnt like the way you ended it like that but keep going.
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Reviewed By: Narutofan#7 On: February 22, 2006 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue it seem interesting ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ceer Uchiwa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 04:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked it. a very good introduction (though slightly confusing and funny as to the 'tree eating clones') to a good sounding story. please continue. Please? Other people are just to LAZY to say what they think tough angry that it is not continued. i know. i'm SLIGHTLY one of those people ^-^
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Reviewed By: Felicity_Angel46 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 02:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So is it Sasuke? Does he know Sasuke? I think it is good so far ^___^ continue! ^__^
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