| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 17:41 PDT
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HAHAhahahaha... yes, I meant to leave the review for this story... when I signed in... it dumped me wherever it did. :D Thanks for another awsome chapter. LOVED it... as always... though I think I'm looking forward to the next one more. ;)
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Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 17:11 PDT
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WOOHOO! LOL...Jili's not going to let Gavin change his mind. Hehehehe...they've got lots of sexual frustration to work through ;)
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 15:50 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I understand completly. On another note. When gavin gave jili the box I thought it was going to be a different surprise. Oh well . Cant wait for next update.
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Reviewed By: Sweetprincess 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 07:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost cried in this chapter. Gavin is such a jerk. He still thinks that JIllian still doesn't know what she want, but it him who cant bring himself to understand the situation. But like you said, "All men are fool." LOL. Hope you can update soon, cuz I'm dying to know the outcome of this Purity.
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 01:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T_T This is so sad. Poor Gavin and Jilli. Get with the program you guys!! Keep up the good work. Wewt cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 00:15 PDT
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This is so frustrating to read and at the same time SO GOOD! Poor Gavin and Jilli, I really wish they would be straight forward with their feelings, but then there wouldnt be a story (or a rather short one!). Great chapters, and i LOVE that Evan is included in them! (The more bad deeds you tell us he has done the more i like him! haha). Keep up the fantastic writing (as it always is) you rock sue!
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Raniatlw [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 23:11 PDT
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I'm very much enjoying this story too!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 22:15 PDT
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Awww, the ending to this just makes me want to cry! I know how you feel about writing with your emotions, but that's what makes stories even better, well IMO it does lol. Anyways, the forums site isn't working for me today and I have no idea why. Oh, and I thought this quote/poem would really fit for Jillian and Gavin: "I'm not suppose to love you, I'm not suppose to car. I'm not suppose to live my life wishing you were there. I'm not suppose to wonder where you are or what you do, but I can't help it because I'm in love with you." Well, I think it fits lol. Anyways, This was a really sad but good chapter. I just hope Jillian can make Gavin understand why she wasn't wearing the necklace, and I hope Gavin can make sure that Jillian doesn't go to Tokyo!
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 21:15 PDT
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I have to say, Gavvie screwed up big time at first. Now, he's starting to get the message through his head. (Thanks, Evan!) And the butterfly earrings to match her necklace... Let's just hope it's not too late for the both of them. ^^ leeksandmisosoup
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Title: chapter 24
Reviewed By: red_tigergirl2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 20:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this has gotten to be the first story i ever started to cry in man the endding was so sad i can't believe i was crying.o this story has got to get better i don't think i want to cry again
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 18:43 PDT
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Gavin needs to sit down and make her listen. Its fine and dandy to do what she asks but what she needs is way more important. Men! LOL! Great Chap as always. ~Usagi
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Reviewed By: savvy_rae [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 17:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too bad U can only rate it up to 10!!! This is one of ur best works!!! So do u post new chapters during the week or just whenever??
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 13:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T_T This is so sad... He forgot her birthday. Gavin, gavin, gavin. Poor Jilli. Fight damnit fight! Oh well... I guess she's done all the fighting... Gavin step up and take charge! :D Anyway. This was a great chapter. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 13:17 PDT
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I agree with Hanks final thought! I just want to grab Gavin by the ear and make him listen! This was a sad chapter. I can't believe he forgot her birthday!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 12:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man.... this one saddend me quite a bit. Im about to go out right now and I suddenly have a severe feeling of saddness on the brink of depression. Thats what I love about your stories. You portray the charactyers and there emotiions so well that the person reading it may actually feel those emotions and understand them. I have a question. What were you feeling while writing this chapter?
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