| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 10:37 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok I might be alone here but I think Gavin was completely cute. Yes I'd have to say I'm completely in love with Gavin. And I have to ask the way this whole chapter ended, with Jillian say Gavin would date her, was that what she was trying to do the whole time. That seems a little sneaky so maybe I'm giving Jilli to much credit, but that whole thing seemed a little planned. Well anyway great chapter Sue.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 10:28 PDT
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lol!! poor gavvie! he *spat* his beer on a girl!!! ::dies::
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 09:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: whoa!
Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 15:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Men like Gavin make me want to cry out in frustration... I swear, when I read this chapter it made me feel like somebody read the mind of my bestfriend and put the words into Gavin's mouth. That's really a fantastic introspection Sueric! I just hope Gavin realizes that its really not good to put girls on a pedestal when it's really the last thing they needed from the ones they love.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 15:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! another great chapter. seriously thougth i love gavin and jillian... and not just their names either. this couple has so many possibilities for love thats sweeter than pure sugar. i cant wait to see what you do with them. i just know they'll be mates. mark my words. you should cut a deal with rumiko takahashi about publishing your stories into actual books as a fanfiction line for inuyasha i know i would buy it!!! i luv ur work sue you are truely an inspiration! i'm seventeen and i'll be on my way to college soon but i havent decided what i want to major in. i enjoy writing but im currently a fine arts major in highschool. u inspire me to start my ownbook and illustrations and who knows maybe by the timei get out of college i'll have created masterpieces up to parr with yours.
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 21:02 PDT
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wow! i loved gavin's thoughts on his relationship with jillian in this chapter, i think it was very, very well written and gave a new light to the whole story. the mention of evan made my day.... PLEASE TELL ME YOU ARE DOING A PURITY STORY ABOUT HIM! (which, would be rather an ironic title header for a story about evan, seeing as he love to cause so much trouble, but i digress) awesome writing as usual and keep up the fantastic work, i shall always remain a huge fan! (i am constantly re-reading your april fools one shot... it was pure genius!)
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 16:14 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I loved that chapter. Soo great! Once again poor Gravin, thinking he's not good enough. I'd think a sexy cowboy be good enough, hell I'd hog tie him and never let him go,;) but anyway. Gravin's memory was so sad, poor him coming soo close to telling her. Mean Cain had to ruin it by threating the poor boy. Oh and I love that line of who's really tai youkai. hehehe Well I hope to read more soon and hopefully get the whole picture of Gravie and Jillian's past!
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 13:32 PDT
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awww...they have such a troubled relationship, it kind of reminds me of the saying, "walking on egg shells", it just kind of seems to me, that their both compromising their feelings just to let the other one being happy. Still, I kind of see where Gavin is comming from, but I REALLY want to know what happened in the 6 years where they stopped talking, and WHY SHE cut him off... this is definitely getting interesting... BTW...what does Jilian look like?
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 13:19 PDT
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Aww, poor Gavvie! I feel so bad for him. Jillian should go over there and give him a hug lol.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 12:05 PDT
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That poor boy has no self esteem at all. Not wanting to touch the shining star because he feels that it would quit shining because of him. Poor Gavin.
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 19:43 PDT
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Great story so far!! I love Jilli and Gavin's characters. Can't wait to read more and find out whats going on with this creepy stalker guy ^^
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Title: entire purity series
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 17:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sueric, i have to hand it to ya...you did a GREAT job writing the Purity series. I dont remember having ever cried so much or having laughed so much or having felt any other emotion equal to the feeling i get when i read purity. Purity 4 made me cry so much but i LOVE the ending. come home everyday anticipating the email that i get saying that you've added yet another amazing chapter to Purity 6. i am so sorry for all of the crap that you have had to deal with from readers that just dont understand that you dont take requests or any else for that matter. all i am is glad that even after that you can still find peace in writing and that your readers, me included, get to enjoy your beautiful knack for writing. Thank you
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Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 16:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She took a topless shoot. And her mother thought that it was...That says alot. She is alot like her mother in wierd ways.
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Reviewed By: hanyouwings [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 22:13 PDT
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I love this story!! Gavin and Jillian are sooo cute together! It's really ironic that Jillian is trying to have Gavin become her mate, but her youki is trying to get her to give up because of all the blatant denials from Gavin; yet Gavin's youki is trying to convince Gavin to become Jillian's mate even though Gavin doesn't want to because he thinks he can't give Jillian the life she wants...this just screams drama...I'm going to cry aren't I...sigh. Oh well, it will be worth it! :)
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Title: Autographs
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 09:24 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I laughed when I read about the faded black Geekfest Sci-Fi Con tee-shirt. That is totally my husband right there. Very cute chapter, Sue!
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