| "Two Brothers" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Aleic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fanfiction please don't stop writing
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Reviewed By: Kikitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 05:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
1st: do not get disencouraged about the grades I gave you. It´s only it pisses me out to check reviews which only gives 10 to everything, and doing so, it discredits in a way a good work (like a lame judge can be impressed with anything) I did not read the last chapter. I thought I was enjoying very much your work, but could not manage to make me read the 4th chapter. As unwilling as I am to confess myself (I thought I was really enjoying), I became a bit tired. Not bored, but even so, it makes me wonder why I became tired. Perhaps it is because of Kakashi, who is my favourite character. I loved all the others but, I I didn´t figured out your Kakashi. I mean, how can he be attracted to Iruka, and after he passes away so badly with Harem no Jitsu? Most of my male friends who happens to be homossexual are cathegorical to say: once one discovers that likes man, can not be "cured" and can not revert to liking females bodies. Unless he likes both... but most of times, ffiction writers would only think them hetero or homossexual, so I am at a loss with your Kakashi. But then, I am a bit fed up of bissexual man (don´t mind this. Personal problems. They usually are very handsome).
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Reviewed By: Isadora The Great [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 20:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great story and I love the humor in it. There are a couple of problems, though. For example, the Uchiha clan wasn't killed off until Sasuke was eight years old, not six. And no one goes to the ninja academy until they're six, not four. The only problem you seem to have is with a timeline, but otherwise, this is aa awesome fic. Can't wait to see more chapters!
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Title: two brothers
Reviewed By: cherry vodca On: September 10, 2006 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi pwease update i wanna read EXPLODING TOLITS *jumps up and down and friends grabing me and tying me to the chair* i even revewed there is hope in a birds song. bye-bye
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Reviewed By: Aleic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the funnyest and one of the very best naruto fanfics I have ever read and can't wait till there's more. the olny problem I had with it is the fact updates are rare. This is a really great fanfic!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: *puppy dog eyes* 9_9
Reviewed By: Ryushi Nigami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Armina-samaaaa...*pitiful whine* Why won't you update? This is funny! This is one of my favorites now! thou shalt update! ...please?
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Reviewed By: rc1ca On: April 11, 2006 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter and looking foward to the exploding tolitet mes . Please take your time, authors have lifes outside of this and they often have to come first. will wait patiently for the next part
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Reviewed By: Buffy_Minamoji On: April 06, 2006 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just to get this off my chest: THATS SICK! HE"S A BOY NO LAW OF NATUER SHOULD ALOW HIM TO BECOME FEMALE YOU ARE SUCH A PERVE!!!!!!! Ok. I'm good, but I love you story and the " 'Nervous caution or out-right panic?' " IS a priceless line. now my sister and I use it every time our parents are mad at us. (I have to play Sasuke which sucks) but your whole idea of Naru-baka and Sas-chan being brothers is so cute. and the plot is great, but you always end in a manner that tells your reader you don't know what your going to do next and yet in your auther note you do know what you want to wright about. And please don't turn this in to some wird: Sasuke ends up likeing Sakura and even though he dosen't want to hurt Naruto he dose, because he wants Sakura more then life it's self. 'cause thats just has 'SCURED' writen all over it. But keep wrighting 'cause it's a cute lovabul story. (Even if I can't stop laughing at the ways the get in trouble.)
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Reviewed By: NekoKaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really amusing. You've done some interesting things, and opened up a bunch of different possible outcomes, all of which are fun to think about. I really got a kick out of the " 'Nervous caution or out-right panic?' " line, because that's where their relationship really shines through as a brotherly/total-best-friends type of thing when they gauge emotions with each other like that. Thumbs up! I hope to read more soon...an idea like this that changes the base relationship of the two chars has almost limitless applications, so I expect lots of updates *waggles finger*
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Reviewed By: Zendura On: April 05, 2006 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
im not usualy an AU person but i'll hand you the Gai sensei double thumbs up SUPER COOL POSE OF EXPLODING YOUTH!!!!!!!!! p.s. Please continue SUPER POSE OF YOUTH /W TECHNO FLARE!
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Reviewed By: Lola_bunny On: March 12, 2006 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That story was so cute! I love the hole thing! Please wright more!
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Reviewed By: galerian57 On: March 01, 2006 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is cool. I really liked it. But I really thought that the second chapter was funny and the part where they were covered in paint I laughed at.
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Reviewed By: Yondaime-sama On: February 23, 2006 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very funny! Please continue!!!!!!
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