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| "◄:— S A K U N O Chronicles —:►" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Title: Astig x 2
Reviewed By: Rockette [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 07:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fanfic is so hilarious, I could actually see it becoming real episodes of Prince of Tennis, you've totally captured each character's idiosyncrasies, mannerisms and unique whims. And I absolutely love how you mark each chapter in Filipino numbers and how you snuck the 'pork adobo' in your ninth chapter. I will absotively posolutely recommend this fanfic to my friends, this is great. Your writing style is incredible too. I love reading fics like yours. More power, Ate Oro Princess.
| Title: Astig
Reviewed By: Rockette [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't finished reading the other chapters however the Ann and Ibu Shinji chapter left me laughing my head off. You really illuminated Shinji's droning syndrome that really distinguishes him as one of the best and funniest characters in Prince of Tennis. I loved how he talked so much about the lost diary and that his opinion consumed an entire paragraph, I love how he finds conjunction to continuing his thoughts, it's very realistic, I know some people like that too. Keep up the good work. Astig yan story mo pare. 'Kuya' (LOL)
| Reviewed By: calex [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, that I wasn't too sure about this at first. I mean, most PoT fics are completely yaoi or shounen-ai and to be frank I do love my non-het pairings to read. And Sakuno really didn't make a big impression on me in the anime. However, I couldn't help but fall in love with this story in the end. The Build-A-Bear chapter? Absolutely genius. I have never laughed that hard and that long about a fic, in ages. It was absolutely brilliant! I adore the humour in this fic, and I can't help but love the minor crossovers you have, especially the mentionings of Ouran. It never occurred to me before, but you're right. Choutarou and Kyouya's last names are the same, so they would be the perfect link for a crossover. Also, the idea of the Shadow Prince being related to the sweet, kind, well-mannered Choutarou just cracks me up, though it kinda makes sense. I do like your Sakuno. She's sweet without being obnoxious, she's kind and so wonderfully awkward. I like her most for her awkwardness. I love the way you've written out the relationships in this fic, and your representations of the different characters. I like your Fuji, both of them, your Atobe, your Tezuka, especially your Shinji. I also love your Eiji and... well, let's just call it everyone. Adored the characterisations of all of them. I love the fact that everyone keeps thinking that she's going out with Tezuka, and how he kept sneezing because people were talking about him. I love how the Rikkai Dai students were torturing Kirihara about his crush on Sakuno, and how they stalked him to the street tennis courts. I adored them walking in on Sakuno as she declared Yukimura's handsomeness (which is, of course, too true), Atobe's repeated blunder and slight vulnerability. I love Tomoka and Ann's repeated game of one-uppance when it comes to who is the better friend, Fuji's indecision about whose jacket to take until Kabaji takes matters into his own hands, Ryoma's awkwardness and his increasingly obvious interest in her... Did I mention the bears? It's worth repeating. I adored the Build-A-Bear incident, and the loss of manly points on behalf of Tachibana and Tezuka. And the idea of Tezuka being a fanboy. All of it. The one minor thing that slightly bothers me a bit about this is how everyone seems to love her. I do see that some of it is platonic, like on the side of Tachibana, Shinji, Kamio, Tezuka, Fuji etc, but... she's too... likeable. I have to say that the effects of which are absolutely hilarious, it does seem a little... too much. Aside from that, though, I have no complaints and even then, it does not detract from the story at all and it remains utterly enjoyable. I love this fic, now. I really hope that you haven't abandoned it and that I'll be able to read a new chapter in the near future. If you've posted it to another place, or if you don't mind having someone to inform when you update, my email address is aida(dot)zahar(at)gmail(dot)com and it would truly be great if you could drop me a line if or when you update it. I really am looking forward to reading more from you.
| Reviewed By: calex [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, that I wasn't too sure about this at first. I mean, most PoT fics are completely yaoi or shounen-ai and to be frank I do love my non-het pairings to read. And Sakuno really didn't make a big impression on me in the anime. However, I couldn't help but fall in love with this story in the end. The Build-A-Bear chapter? Absolutely genius. I have never laughed that hard and that long about a fic, in ages. It was absolutely brilliant! I adore the humour in this fic, and I can't help but love the minor crossovers you have, especially the mentionings of Ouran. It never occurred to me before, but you're right. Choutarou and Kyouya's last names are the same, so they would be the perfect link for a crossover. Also, the idea of the Shadow Prince being related to the sweet, kind, well-mannered Choutarou just cracks me up, though it kinda makes sense. I do like your Sakuno. She's sweet without being obnoxious, she's kind and so wonderfully awkward. I like her most for her awkwardness. I love the way you've written out the relationships in this fic, and your representations of the different characters. I like your Fuji, both of them, your Atobe, your Tezuka, especially your Shinji. I also love your Eiji and... well, let's just call it everyone. Adored the characterisations of all of them. I love the fact that everyone keeps thinking that she's going out with Tezuka, and how he kept sneezing because people were talking about him. I love how the Rikkai Dai students were torturing Kirihara about his crush on Sakuno, and how they stalked him to the street tennis courts. I adored them walking in on Sakuno as she declared Yukimura's handsomeness (which is, of course, too true), Atobe's repeated blunder and slight vulnerability. I love Tomoka and Ann's repeated game of one-uppance when it comes to who is the better friend, Fuji's indecision about whose jacket to take until Kabaji takes matters into his own hands, Ryoma's awkwardness and his increasingly obvious interest in her... Did I mention the bears? It's worth repeating. I adored the Build-A-Bear incident, and the loss of manly points on behalf of Tachibana and Tezuka. And the idea of Tezuka being a fanboy. All of it. The one minor thing that slightly bothers me a bit about this is how everyone seems to love her. I do see that some of it is platonic, like on the side of Tachibana, Shinji, Kamio, Tezuka, Fuji etc, but... she's too... likeable. I have to say that the effects of which are absolutely hilarious, it does seem a little... too much. Aside from that, though, I have no complaints and even then, it does not detract from the story at all and it remains utterly enjoyable. I love this fic, now. I really hope that you haven't abandoned it and that I'll be able to read a new chapter in the near future. If you've posted it to another place, or if you don't mind having someone to inform when you update, my email address is aida(dot)zahar(at)gmail(dot)com and it would truly be great if you could drop me a line if or when you update it. I really am looking forward to reading more from you.
| Reviewed By: MizuFaia On: September 10, 2006 02:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHHHH Thank god I found this fic on MediaMiner because I was super depressed when ff.net crashed on me while I was on the 6th chapter. Your writing is great! A bit complex, but maybe because I'm not as familiar with the characters as you are ^_^ Anyway love, love, LOVE the comedy in all this...the Eiji scene where he was thinking about all the chibis was classic. Keep up the good work and keep writing!
| Reviewed By: Ficfan3484 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, chibi army, ^_^ every time I read this it gets better and better, I love the way you portray Eiji ^_^ Please update soon.
| Reviewed By: Ficfan3484 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute!! ^_^ Lol, Touya thinks Sakuno is Tezuka's girlfriend. The jackets! I love how Kabaji solves Fuji's problem. I'm curious how Ochibi is going to get out of that question. Please update soon....did I save a bunny?
| Title: nice!!!
Reviewed By: White Alchemist Taya(not logged on) On: July 18, 2006 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lolz!! awesome stuff!! the jackets!!!
| Reviewed By: Ficfan3484 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh, a Tezuka/Sakuno debate that would be interesting to see. Poor Atobe, I feel a little sorry for him at the moment. ^_^ You make Sakuno so cute.
| Reviewed By: Me On: June 05, 2006 09:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
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| Reviewed By: Ficfan3484 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 07:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet! Hikaru no go and Prince of Tennis, I love this chapter, it was so funny. Every time I read it, I think it's funnier. Please update soon.
| Reviewed By: Ficfan3484 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 07:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the updates ^_^ I can't wait till you update again, please update soon.
| Reviewed By: quizza On: May 05, 2006 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg, i was choking on me good ol' oxygen when the part about "mt. fuji" came up. good job!
| Reviewed By: eternal17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 13:01 CDT
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Your fanfic is really funny!!!I love it, I enjoyed reading it! please continue updating PD:I like the pairing too
| Reviewed By: Shanice On: April 29, 2006 04:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fic that I really enjoyed. I love the story and the characters, as well as the events happening. :) I can't wait for the next update! ^^ Pee Es, I'm a Filipino as well! Teehee!
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