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"I'm in Control!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ]
 Title: nyaha
Reviewed By: Alberiogurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 16, 2006 12:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I'll fix that. Kami, give me a break. i finally get on the computer after more than a month of it not being in my reach, and this is how u greet ur friend who is now a kazillion miles away? (Yes, I have moooooved. I'm living in Templeton now. dont believe moi? Ask Kay.)
 Title: ...
Reviewed By: "Eclari"  On: July 09, 2006 00:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, to start, there is no other Cindee in Kayla's head. Do you know any other Carls that act slightly act the same way? Also, about you "owning" those people. The statement is in a clear, unobtuse format. It blatantly states that YOU "own" those people. By the way, why would you ask me how I knew they were different people instead of just stating in a clear way if they are the same person or not? Thank you, and... have a...day?
 Title: btw
Reviewed By: Alberiogurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 08, 2006 23:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Also, the owny thing. It just means that they are not owned my manga-ka's or anime creators. nya! ;P
 Title: well
Reviewed By: Alberiogurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 08, 2006 23:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
how do ya know if it isnt a diff. Carl, or a Diff. Cindee, or a Diff. Sess? Nya! ;P
 Title: Also....
Reviewed By: "Eclari"  On: July 07, 2006 20:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
And I quote, "Naru: Lycoris doesn't own anyone cept Herself, Eclari, AD, Kayla, Carl, Cory, Esther, Taylorr, Sara Betty, and the very few times she mentions her, Rina." You do not own Carl, Kayla, or Cindee. You have to ask Carl's permission as he is Copyrighted. To himself. Cindee is copyrighted to Kayla, who is copyrighted to Adrienne, who is copyrighted to Julia.
 Title: INCEST!!!!!!!1
Reviewed By: "Eclari"  On: July 07, 2006 16:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sessho-Maru is my father!!!!!!!12111111one!!! Well......the person I consider my father. It's more incestual to me than being paired up with my blood father!!!!11112335512!!!!! You sux0rs!!! Oh, and by the way Cindee is friends with Kayla, and Carl isn't scared of either of us. Also... Carl ish too cool to be in your fic! -Julia :]

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