| "The Boy who would become Hokage" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Joker2009 On: April 15, 2006 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey it is a great story,keep on going with it,and best of luck! I LOVE THE STORY!!
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Reviewed By: Setolover2 On: March 15, 2006 23:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep going. i love your story. Update soon.
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Title: FINISH IT!!!!
Reviewed By: vixypixy_no9whoisnotloggedon On: March 10, 2006 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A few gramatical errors but other than that, I LOVED THE GOD DAMN STORY! PLEASE FINISH IT OH LOVELY AUTHOR OF THIS AWESOME FICCIE!!!
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