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| "Banditos" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] | Reviewed By: im_alive On: July 05, 2006 16:05 CDT
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Two years passed? That's a lot of time I wonder what happened all that time or were those two years suppose to be the time Hotstreak spent with Richie? Is Richie the Butcher? That would be a huge coincidence is he was. If he hates Hotstreak so much why would he help him after all he does know about Blayne, Hotstreak mentioned him after all. Is this it or will there be more, I'm asking too many questions.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: July 05, 2006 15:37 CDT
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Woman you live to confuse me don't you? Now what I'm wondering is isn't Jean the name of Virgil's mom? and does this mean Muh and Pa are seperated or are they confined to the house? Overall I think this spilt is a good thing.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: July 05, 2006 14:54 CDT
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What the heck is all this stuff they keep seeing first Hotstreak and now Virgil. What's wrong with Hotstreak for the last couple of chapters he's been sleeping pretty hard something has to be going on with him. I'm kinda of grateful for this chapter compared to what has been going on it was extremly easy. I feel king of bad because I betraying all my characters, I apprehensive of both Hotstreak and Richie right now they just aren't the same it's tramatizing to see such a great change in them. Right now I feel like the only one I can depend on is Virgil.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: July 05, 2006 14:24 CDT
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Oh my god that was so messed up. Who the heck is Muh? Is she real or not? Was she the one Hotstreak saw? What the heck happened to Richie it was such a drastic change from the beginning of the fic, I miss that boy, he's not Richie anymore. I think I'm going to have to start referring to him as Richard or something because he's way different from the character I know and love. God I feel bad for Virgil and Junior it's going to be horrible when they make it back to the ranch. I kind of hoping Alva's going to get his, I like that Junior started to put doubt in the town's head and hopefully after seeing the way Alva treated Virgil, like he had no choice of leaving, the town will get even more paranoid.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: June 22, 2006 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god woman you must be having a hard time with directing this fic. I'm kind of afraid with how this thing is going to turn out with all the space between and the puzzling secrets, I'm terrified and giddy. As for this chapter I like how both Hotstreak and Richie seem to think the other is crazy, it's bound to bring much confusion. As for Junior that boy lives to confuse me a big part of me hopes he doesn't get anything his way just for the jerk he was in the past, and then there's the rebellious teen side that says yeah stick to his old man the bastard deserves it. And with Virgil I want him to find Hotstreak to knock some sense into him but I have a feeling that would probably bring more trouble. So for now I'm glad that they're looking for Sharon.
| Reviewed By: Colddaye On: June 09, 2006 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really know how to bring the angst to the party. I didn't see the slitting the wrists coming either, though now that I think through Richie's life to this point, yeah. It's nice to see his Gear-like persona emerging with curiosity, and I also like the interplay between Junior and Hotstreak. Did you solidly address how Richie ended up with Alva? I get the impression he was pressed into that service/kidnapped/something. Anyway, nothing's wrong with a dark fic, they just put me through the emotional wringer. And a lot of your Hs/R is daaaark, but so good. I hate fluff and I like that you make the characters work to achieve any happiness, but sometimes I feel like I've run a marathon and they're still in a dark place. Meh. It's a dark pairing when you really get down to it, I guess.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: June 05, 2006 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He he the update-ness of this update had me giddy. I liked that Richie was going over the whys to himself over his attempt, and I love how he makes something not so complicated into something that could take years to dissect. I'm wondering about Richie talking to the baddies thing. Hotstreak was really surprised and it made me wonder is that something only Richie can do or is it something nobody in Blood Inc. bothered to try before. Or maybe it was just those particular baddies that could talk because I don't ever remember Richie being able to understand the zombies. That boy is just opening more and more doors to his persona. It's all great and still creeping me out I look forward to more.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: June 02, 2006 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I'm so stupid. I was all "I'm not going to read it until Sunday, you know make it last until the next update", but no me an my impatience. Oh well. This chapter was weird and I don't know how I feel about the whole Richie slitting his wrist thing. I'm just glad you didn't go over that scence otherwise I'd have been bawling, I had issues in the past with that sort of thing and my sister, so I'm ever grateful. Hotstreak sure is getting desperate and I don't know how I feel about that. It's like he's not even trying to explian himself to Richie but just assuming he gets what he means. Richie's like a prize to him.I kind of hope Richie does run off and maybe he could run into Virgil instead or maybe Blayne and his boys at least there he would be helpful with all the info he has on the baddies. It's supriseing on how Junior is really trying I liked the interaction between Richie and him. They were both kind of weird about the situation and Richie kept trying to push the boundies to see when the Junior he knew would emerge, it was tense and funny at the same time.
| Reviewed By: colddaye On: May 25, 2006 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Crapola. I meant to edit my comment - so disregard the first one I put in. Sorry.
| Reviewed By: colddaye On: May 25, 2006 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch. 19 creeped me out too. And every Indian died? Dammit. Just one quibble, homosexuality wasn't accepted as a "deviance" or even a recognized category until the very late 1800s, early 1900s, so I don't know Hotstreak would think it was wrong with a title. He may understand it was out of the ordinary to want to be with a man when there are other options available, but it was not unheard of to have same-sex romances or relationships with most schools being all guy or all girl - if no other options were available, I don't think it was that big a deal, just kind of not made public. Anyway, you continue to bring the creep and I like it. As far as Hs/R goes, it gets happier, right?
| Reviewed By: colddaye On: May 25, 2006 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch. 19 creeped me out too. And every Indian died? Dammit. Just one quibble, homosexuality wasn't accepted as a "deviance" or even a recognized category until the very late 1800s, early 1900s, so I don't know Hotstreak would think it was wrong with a title. He may understand it was out of the ordinary to want to be with a man when there are other options available, but it was common to have same-sex relationships or at least romances with most schools being all girl or all guy. Anyway, you continue to bring the creep and I like it. As far as Hs/R goes, it gets happier, right?
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: May 24, 2006 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha I came back, did I reread this chapter heck no otherwise I'd have been mad again. Anyway I loved it all the way until it turned for the worse but even than I liked it but in a whole different way. You had me giggling like mad when Richie shouted 'nothing' I don't know whay but it seemed funny almost like he got caught doing something naughty and denying it even with proof. Also I had to smile when Hotstreak noticed he was being checked out I could just imagine him puffing out his chest and struting out like some rooster. As for what happened after that I have mixed feelings. Of course I have much saddness for Richie and I feel he is justified, it seems the rape that is done to 'make you feel good' is wrose then the violent rape, and thank you very much for no pen, I don't think I would have made it through the chapter if Hotstraek went all the way. As for Hotstreak I'm mad at the boy but I also feel sorry for him. He's so afraid of so many things that he can't let things be good for him. He becomes greedy when he finds something good in his life and he has to take advantage of it while he has it otherwise he thinks it'll be taken away from him. And while I hate what he did to Richie, knowing the things you wrote before about him in this fic I can see why he did what he did but I cannot excuse him for it because he does have a sense of right and wrong, and he had many times to make what he did right by stopping but he didn't. If Hotstreak wasn't so stubborn about expressing himself and talked to Richie I think they really could have gotten somewhere but I doubt that would work now, it'll be interestingto see how you make a romance work between these two now the Hotstreak has betrayed Richie twice. Also good for Junior hopefully he can do as he set out to do, but I have a feeling it won't be that easy for him. Sorry for the rambling but dang energy drinks are really something. I hope you didn't get confused.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: May 23, 2006 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. Poor Richie. Stupid Hotstreak. I'm a little to stun to leave a proper review,this chapter left me mad and left a creepy feeling. How is this going to get better that's twice now, stupid Hotstreak and his man logic. I'll review itagain after I get over it.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: May 19, 2006 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love when you write jealous Hotstreak it gets me everytime. Poor Richie is probably all bewildered not knowing what's going on, but I doubt he could really be that dense at least I don't think he would be. As for Junior he's always been a difficult character for me even on the show. He's like this negelcted kid who wants daddy's attention so he goes bad, but he also knows what he's doing is bad, but it's not too bad because he's doing it for his daddy. Yeah the kid never had a chance. I know I don't like him but I know I don't hate him so for me he's somewhere in between the range of dislike and hate, maybe I'll sort of like him later but that depends if he changes. As for Richie thinking about his feelings toward Junior that threw me for a loop I was all eww no. But you know that's what I love about the way you write Richie he believes everyone is redeemable. As for the Stand thing there is no copying it's just the feel of good vs evil that drew a simialrity for me. I'm loving this more and more each chapter and I love the semi romance plot developing between Richie and Hotstreak.
| Reviewed By: im_alive On: May 16, 2006 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man this chapter was great. It had me crying like no tomorrow. The whole feel of this chapter kind of reminded me of the movie 'The Stand.' It's spiritual, gory, and way to suspenseful for it's own good. I'm glad this is going to be something of a long story it's too good for a cop out.
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