|"A Fling" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]|
| Title: More?|
Reviewed By: Cierzo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 15:26 CST
Hi! I like your style very much and the way you see Touga as the cold bastard that he is (I love him). As your first reviewer said, what can we do to make you write more??? I'd just love to see if Saionji goes to the meeting and what happens next. This is one of the not-so-many fics that I would like to keep on reading, so please, write more?
| Reviewed By: KC-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 22:32 CST|
Style of Writing: 7 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
hmmmmm... very VERY nice. its a cute scene to think of saionji playing with bubbles. i also liked his ending line. ^______^ ::crosses fingers:: i hope there will someday be more.
| Reviewed By: Kudasaru On: July 11, 2002 15:31 CDT|
Now the question is, what could I say that would induce you to continue on this line of writing? ;)
I thought this story was quite marvelous, your writing style is quite good, the characterization was perfect, and I really would like to see more of it.
And now I shall go and read everything else you've written...