| "My Thoughts Before You" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2009 14:16 CST
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this is so good, i cant wait to find out what happens next
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Reviewed By: lexmex On: April 03, 2008 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loove this seris but i hate it when their are cliffies
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 07:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... at least ky is making inuyasha think twice about getting married... but it was kinda stupid of miroku and sango to force kagome to go to new york... seems like naraku was expecting them... but how did he know which hotel they would be at... now miroku is out cold and kagome just got kidnapped... and inuyasha & ky know nothing about it yet... hope inuyasha will see kikyo's true colors soon though... inuyasha's lack of reaction to kagome sure is pitiful... everything is just getting frustrating... update soon... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 20:26 CDT
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One quick question, do you have something against New Yorkers? LOL! Ok, great chapters. Inuyasha is acting quite calm about all of this though...hmm wonder why? Ah well, I guess I'll find out sooner or later...lol. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... well things have been busy in kagome's life lately... there's inuyasha who came back and whom she loves but is getting married to someone else... then there was kouga who stayed with her but whom she didn't love enough and is getting along fine with someone else... happy that kagome is gonna start on getting her own life in order... and very mature of her in letting inuyasha go... kinda like sesshoumaru getting on inuyasha's case... like kagome's decision on letting ky attend inuyasha's wedding and her not going... the wedding will be interesting... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: MiaFitz On: March 23, 2008 22:30 CDT
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I really enjoyed reading this story. Hopefully you'll have a happy ending for Kagome. Inuyasha, I'm not so concerned with, he's not number one on my list right now, if only because he's seemingly unconcerned about her and I feel so bad for Kagome. Half of me wants him to go through the wedding so Kikyo could get his arse for all his worth. If he would marry a girl he'd known for a month and leave Kagome (whom he knew for years and had a son with) like that without a backwards glance, then he deserves some pain. I hate the fact that he never even acknowledged the words she said. I just really feel for Kagome. Or maybe I'm just biased because I love Kagome in this. But I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, please don't make us wait so long!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 06:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... feel bad for kagome... in the end she might not be with kouga or inuyasha... one left her and is just a friend while the other is getting married... but hope this is an inuyasha/kagome pairing though... don't think kagome should attend the wedding... she needs to straighten up her life first now that kouga left her... she has to deal with her son ky's reaction... but then again wonder who will find out about kikyo's plan with naraku... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Vickey On: March 23, 2008 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. It is 5 am Easter morning and because of a sleepless night, I stumbled across this little nugget. You are a master at creating great cliffhangers. Never know where this one's going. I love the fact that Kagome could end up with either guy, (who knows even Sesshoumaru) I hope it's Yash, but you're very good at building suspense and I think this is an excellent piece. Keep writing!!!
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Like DarkMoonStar, i laughed too. but before i laughed i sounded like my computer when i try to watch a movie on the Internet. ah...ah...ah..., and so on. i don't know why. waa, i'm so bad. ok, now back to reality. i liked it, and i like hemi. definitly like hemi. keep updating. later. P.S. do you send an email to every reviewer? just wondering.
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 18:07 CDT
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This might sound horrible, but I laughed at the end. I don't know why exactly, but I just found it funny for some reason. =D Poor Kags and Inuyasha. Wow quick update, can't wait for more! ;D
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 22:22 CDT
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Thank you for the email! I'm very happy that you updated, but then again, life can do that to a person. So no hard feelings...haha. Wow is all I can say right now. Great chapter, the ending...well..you can understand. Can't wait for more. =)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... kagome sure is in a bind... hope she makes the right choice... and hope inuyasha catches kikyo talking with naraku about her plan to get his money... too many issues - getting complicated... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 05:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love your story so much. You absolutely have to come back more often. you space them out too much and i like your story to much to be put through this agony. i'm addicted to this story. sorry to sound pushy. please update sooner. later.
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 13:17 CDT
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I love your story, it's good. Please continue to update it. I hate Kikyo with a passion, I hope she rots in he**... I would type it out fully but i'm in school and the teacher can see all of the computer screens on her laptop so yea.. I can't wait for your next chapter. please continue I'll be waiting for your next chapter...
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 18:44 CST
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Great chapter, I loved the interaction between every character, very mature. I can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Crimson Dawns Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, good story, i"ll be adding it to my favourite waiting for updates so please do. As soon as I read Kagome's line 'can't resist a man in Wranglers' or something to that effect i started sketching. I'll post it with a link to the story. and let me tell you Kouga is yummy..or well i tried to make him yummy..lol. Good Job!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 00:08 CST
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great chapter, I really hope she ends up with Inuyasha, I mean Kikyo doesn't seem that bad, but you know this feels like 'Sweet Home Alabama' with a twist..haha the son being the twist...lol. So you get my drift?? INU/KAG 4ever! lol let me stop, please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 10:12 CST
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OMG this is sooo good, why did you have to stop there though!?!?! I'm half way off my seat and waiting for more! PLEASE update soon!!
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