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"A Whisper of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Rosa-Chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 18, 2012 09:30 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
well what should i say......d story rocks!!! i must say that night mare part really got me....u suck at grammer and spellings(plz dont mind i'm a bit frank) but me evn worser than you are, believe me!!!:)wat more....oh yeah plzz update really soon!!!(is miyu's fiancee a nice guy or 1 of those criminals kanata's boss was talking about???)
 Title: Improve pls...
Reviewed By: davish666 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 05, 2006 03:12 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
No offense buddy, but I can't get the setting right, it is as if readers will not know when and where it happend, and you have to improve on that :), the details are too specified as well and it makes your story sooo... long, no offense okay buddy, but please continue writing and update soon.

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