| "My Lives, My Deaths" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Chani On: June 01, 2012 17:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow what a lovely story! You are so gifted, i love all your stories so far! U |
Title: Beautiful!!
Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2010 08:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love everything I've read of you so far, but this one really did bring a smile to my face, and tears to my eyes. Funny thing, I guess all of us, Vegeta lovers, think of his life in a similar way, but reading about it, and if it's written so beautifully, is so much more satisfying. |
Title: Sobs...seriously!
Reviewed By: BlueUnicorn On: June 02, 2010 00:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You never dissapoint me! This is just pure genius !!! Too bad there's not a higher scale to rate, you're definitely waaaaaayy over 10!!!
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Reviewed By: surmise On: August 08, 2009 05:00 EDT
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Admittedly... My throat did that weird closing-up thing when you get all teary eyed, haha. But I digress. This was just beautiful. I kind of want to wish him luck in finding Bulma again /is weird
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Title: Awsome!
Reviewed By: Badtzy On: February 12, 2008 21:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really, really good. Very emotional. I loved the way it ended. Really impressed. I found you here through fanfiction.net. My nick is Badtzy over there, too.
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Reviewed By: PrinceVegeta88 On: April 10, 2007 20:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, you really do have an impressive talent for writing, I stumbled upon one of your stories and was so enticed by your style for writing that I had to read another. I would have to say that of all the fictions I've read (and there have been many) I think yours holds Vegeta most accurately. I'd like to believe that this is indeed how they really came to be, thank you for an amazing read, "Dark Desire, and My Lives, My Deaths"
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Title: Absolutely stunning
Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: June 24, 2006 00:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Vegeta. He has been through so much despair, drama and overall intensity of life and yet he still manages to hold onto some part of him that is inherently loving and good, even if he doesnt show it through outrageous and flirtatious actions. Absolutely beautiful work. ~Aaralyn~
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Reviewed By: alexandrea romanzesco On: March 05, 2006 00:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm.. i was trying to read this on ff.net but it wasn't loading right.. wow! you really have a knack for first person stuff! you write so well and stay so true to teh charcter. all-in-all the story was terrific and beautiful.. ~alex~
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Reviewed By: morgansgirl23 On: March 03, 2006 22:46 EST
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This was so beautifully written I actually cried at the end. You are a fantastic writer and I am always excited to read any of your past works and future creations. Bravo!!!
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: March 03, 2006 19:31 EST
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Beautiful! Exactly what he would be thinking, Imagery was great. Some people think Vegeta would never be content with his life on Earth but I do so this is just so correct. Thanks
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Title: DEATJH!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: March 03, 2006 14:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME CRY!!!!!!!!!!! I have already freaking bawled my eyes out enough today!!!!! Beautiful though...damn it!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitauri/Fyrechylde On: March 03, 2006 13:40 EST
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It's funny, a friend and I were discussing something eerily similar to this story only this morning. I enjoyed this fic....the story-telling of it but also the deepening insight of Vegeta. The only thing that I'm disappointed with (which is rare since you are my favorite fanfic writer) is the death scene. For me personally, I can only see him dying in battle as befits a Saiyan Prince, though you do create a plausible scene. Nevertheless, fantastic writing and thank you for the refined perception of this amazing character.
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Reviewed By: TT On: March 03, 2006 04:23 EST
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I love it! Last line ends it perfectly.
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