| "Vampire's Breath" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Unfortunate On: December 02, 2007 14:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Just me flaming. It's nothing personal, kid. u___u" This was possibly the stupidest fan fiction I've ever read. The Souhma family as vampires? Seriously. You write alright for your age, but your dialog and story line sucks. It was unbearably corny. Keep writing and work on dialog. And Akito isn't a boy.
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Reviewed By: blackrose92 On: March 20, 2006 12:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fanfic was really good i enjoyed it. please try and write the next chapters quickly.
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Title: Bloody Excellent!
Reviewed By: foxfire79 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 01:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a new fan of fruits basket, and this was a fantastic fic! The characters were spot on, and I can't wait to read more from you! Two thumbs up! :)
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