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| "Lost Without You" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Bra ROX On: January 28, 2007 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was alright, i need another few chapters though then i can really tell you, I like the plot of it, I think it'll be really good just add a few more chapters. Try spacing out more paragraphs too, hope to read more soon! :)
| Reviewed By: LZ566 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
It got a six because it was too short for me to be able to tell anything. Make another chapter, but make it longer, ok? Then maybe I can honestly estimate how good it is.
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