| "The different women" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: gentle_whispers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 23:50 CDT
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cool =)
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan (not singed in) On: March 26, 2006 17:30 CST
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waaa...iwant more...no epolugeit too short:(
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 19:03 CST
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yay im sighned in :P
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Title: eekums!!!
Reviewed By: kitsunesan (not singed in) On: March 19, 2006 12:07 CST
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pllzzz contenue!! i love this story! ..........chappys shold be longer but i still love it. i myself have beautiful red hair and i love the idea of inu's sis haveing red hair. just like ayame!
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Reviewed By: Empatheia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 18:01 CST
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Teehee, thanks hon. Concrit: it gets a little confuzzling sometimes as to whether you're writing in first person (Crystal saying 'I this and I wonder that') or third person (looking in from outside, 'Crystal thought this and did that'). Other than that, lovely job! I hope you understand that concrit is meant to help you become a better writer, not meant to make you feel bad. *huggles* I really like your character Crystal, she's very unique. The poem is beautiful!
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Reviewed By: Empatheia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 23:20 CST
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XD I love original characters. Ireland is my second favorite foreign country after Japan, so yays! I like her, she's fun. Good job so far.
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