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| "Broken Mirror" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: KoroshiyaZwei [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 18:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Same Shane Jayell dreck, interesting story idea wasted on the promotion of shojo-ai. My question for you Jayell is why do you waste your writing talent on the same stories with different characters? Don't get me wrong, I like shojo-ai, it's good in small doses but dude it's ALL you write...no variety other than the different characters and a slight variation of your plots. Some of your stories could do without the lesbianism and be great reads, but like I said, blatant promotion of shojo-ai gets in the way. For once, Shane Jayell, could you write a heterosexual couple in your story? I mean...I wouldn't ask this of anyone, but shojo-ai is all you write and it's kinda boring now.
| Reviewed By: Marine Brother Shran [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 20:05 CST
Comment/Review:
it's interesting. i can't really rate it or commen at the moment, because you just started it. but this is interesting. Yui alive, Gendo dead, Rei Ikari, Shinji Ayanami, i wonder how this will turn out. btw, is this a pure Yui/Ritsuko? or is there some Shinji/Rei? I wouldn't mind Rei somehow coming across Shinji. well anyways, that's all from me. Cheers ^^ Ja ne
| Title: very nice
Reviewed By: Shadowmeteor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
not too bad at all, i liked the little twist at the end. u spoke about possibly letting other authors continue and i'm not gonna lie, it did give me some ideas. however, i wish to make sure that you dont have any other plans for it before i ask to see if i can use ur ideas. anyway, great job. Ja ne
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