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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Tamu Ali [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 15:33 CDT
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Funny, I was thinking about this story and it's like you were reading my mind about the daughter thing. lol...Since all the boys have "K" names her's could be Koyomi or Kumiko: "Enternally beautiful child." lol...how strange you wrote this chapter meantioning a girl, lol. I can't wait to read more...keep it up!
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Title: Terrific!
Reviewed By: AngelofLight (not signed in) On: June 01, 2006 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another baby! My nephew Connor is 5, and he also spills the beans about anything he might overhear. I'm the one he normally spills to though lol. I really enjoy how you portray the characters, you mold them to fit the story, yet keep them in character enough so that they are recognizable. I also love Kane and Keitaro's personalities! Kane reminds me so much of Connor that I just giggle through all of his scenes (personality wise; I think my brother would rather have a root canal then let him have his hair that long. he'd pull a Keitaro and cut if off while Connor wasn't paying attention). That last line especially made me laugh, about wanting a girl since Shuichi doesn't count. Hilarious! Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: devilsincarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 16:43 CDT
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Lmao that was funny baby what baby? I really like this fanficiton and hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: Ichigo pocky On: May 31, 2006 17:32 CDT
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The extenstion to your chapter was very good, it was very sweet, very sad and funny at the end. It would be nice for Shuichi to have a baby girl. Anyway, will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter, until then.
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Reviewed By: sherlock sunshine On: May 30, 2006 18:04 CDT
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LOL! that was great. shuichi doesn't count. HAHAHAHA! now that was hilarious. you gotta love how kids can over hear everthing you say no matter now quiet it is said. cant wait for the next chapter. update soon.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: DearMe On: May 30, 2006 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is so dear to me! You made them so perfect togehter, they're a noisy, lovely family! They're soo real and after all this time, all the struggles and everything they're still the COUPLE and theur family is absolutely the most beautiful thing ever. I can't wait to see Shu pregnant again XD! Thank you for continuing! Tons of inspiration and hope your computer problems are solved ^^
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Reviewed By: shu no baka (not logged in) On: May 30, 2006 14:39 CDT
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I'm bursting out laughing here too!!! Kane's more like Yuki than Shuichi! CX
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Reviewed By: ashcat not signedi n On: May 30, 2006 13:00 CDT
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Chpt 9: I liked the additions, it was nice to see Shu talk with Maiko - I always felt like they were close from the manga. Hmm.. so another baby, that will be tough to juggle with little Kira and a possible comeback career. And of course the biography is waiting at home as well. I'm curious to see where you end up taking it :) I am really enjoying this story!
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Reviewed By: morly On: May 30, 2006 12:58 CDT
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Very good chapter. Loved the baby dialogu with Kane. I cringe to know during what act he over heard the conversation though. Kids can say the darndest things.
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Reviewed By: SaraLoo On: May 24, 2006 17:27 CDT
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I love your story, it's so cute to see Shu and Yuki interacting with their kids. Will be waiting for the next chapter, hope it's soon.
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Reviewed By: Ichigo pocky On: May 23, 2006 20:28 CDT
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It was a good chapter, I think Kane is way cutw. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter, as well as 'Sorry'. I'm always excited when I see You've update either story. Ja ne for now.
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Reviewed By: Tear-Trax On: May 03, 2006 10:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all I want to thank you for reviewing my story on Gurabiteshiyon, 'Second Chance'. It meant a lot to me, thanx. I'm sorry about your grandfather, I also lost mine, it was about 13 years ago, it still hurts, and I miss him more than anything, but as they say, it gets easier as time passes. Anyway, I love your story, I agree it does help to write about your own experiences, when I wrote my story, it felt like a weight had been lifted. I've read all your other stories, and I've got to say, you are one fantastic writer, and I'm a dedicated fan of yours, and will await eagerly for more chapters. Once again thanks. From Lisa (TearTrax)
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Reviewed By: Lady-Loss On: April 24, 2006 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, I love your story. I also love how you add details of Shu+Yuki's kids, it's way cute. Anyway hope you add another chapter soon, can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Julianna32 On: April 22, 2006 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I can't tell you how much I love this saga, you made it possible for them to have a family, more than 20 years together and it's all still interesting and so enjoyable to read! You're great, thanks for writing
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Reviewed By: shu no baka (not logged in) On: April 21, 2006 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KANE IS SOOOOOOOOOOOO CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE!!! A mini-Eiri!!! *squeal* But that was so mean of him, to cut of his brother's braid... XD I DUNNO WHAT TO SAY!!! JUST UPDATE SO I CAN SEE HIS REACTION TO GRAMPS' FACE!!!
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