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Title: More :D
Reviewed By: gravilove19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for your next update, and I know how it feels to go back to school. I went back to school on the 8th of August D:. See you next time.
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Title: catti-dono (baka deshi of Tsuki-sama sensai)
Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 19:45 CDT
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Kami...I thought you would never up date....Im sorry that Shuichi, so far, is not pregnant...Im interested in his leg problem....since it seems to be one of the major focuses in this story....cannot wait for an update....catti
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Reviewed By: Morlana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 10:50 CDT
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Though if Eiri had a suspicion that Shu could still be pregnant why is he kicking his leg? Kind of had me thinking he as mad cause he's not pregnant. and why kick him at all what happened to the head thwap or even a verbal snap?
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Reviewed By: Morlana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 10:48 CDT
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phew almost missed this chapter, it 'snot connected for some reason to chapter 12 and I just came here to reread the entire story and saw 13. Yeah I agree a home test isn't always accurate and I have my fingers crossed that Shu's problems are minor with his legs.
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: Enzeru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOhhh Me likey. I love reading M-pregs and personally I think there aren't enough of them. Your writing truly captivates me. I can't stop reading your works once I've started. I hope you'll update soon, cant wait. Great job... //Enzeru
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Reviewed By: Tamu Ali [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 13:47 CDT
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awww...babies, babies, babies! yaay! wow! you didn't notices the boys had "K" names? cool! true writer!
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Reviewed By: Ashcatnot logged in On: July 22, 2006 21:27 CDT
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Aww...what a cliff hanger! I really like this story, its simple uncomplicated nature realy works well, and I love seeing your vision of Shu and Eiri as parents! Indeed is he pregnant or not?! If he is I really *reallY* hope you do what you havn't done in all your other pregenancy stories, that you really talk about him being pregnant beyond the steroetypes and how Shu will handle it so soon after his last little baby :) I really have been hoping to read you discussing shu's pregnancy in detail in one of your fics!
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: July 20, 2006 16:11 CDT
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Kami-sama, you are a big tease, leaving us hanging like that....GEEZE some writers...laughs...teasing us with his legs giving him problems but then the main problem is he preggie or not?...youll probably wait another 2-3 weeks before updating just to be mean to us...cries...I love this story, its sooo awesome...cannot wait to see what happens...(still think his spine and legs need to be addressed)...catti....
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Reviewed By: sherlock sunshine On: July 03, 2006 19:26 CDT
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oh come on! you cant just end it like that! it's not fair! YOU BIG MEANIE!!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Kalico (laziness is my worst virtue) On: July 01, 2006 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so loved this, i hope you can update soon. you made my day!!
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: July 01, 2006 00:08 CDT
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Oh you are sooo bad leaving us like this...I hate it when we are left hanging...I still think Shu-chan's back prolems should take prediscent...no baby...Shu-chan needs to have back surgery...then baby...laughs..I have a one track mind...just how much can I give to Shu-chan...love your story...was wondering if you were ever going to update....you are a big tease sometimes.....I cannot wait for another update....love you to pieces...waiting with bated breath for an update...catti
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Reviewed By: sugarkram On: June 30, 2006 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOO!!! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR WEEKS FOR AN UPDATE TO FIND OUT IF SHU IS REALLY PREGNANT OR NOT!!! WAAHH.Please update soon!!!!!!! Like in a day or two maybe? please? Im a big fan of your stories and I've read all your pieces and I really love them.
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: June 10, 2006 23:40 CDT
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I have read ALL of your stories...this one is the best by far...I love the writting, the mood, the feel of this story...I was kind of hoping you would go into Shuichi's limb detail more...I feel that is about time that he would start having symptomsof leg weakness, giving out and would have to have the SURGERY that was mentioned in the last story...I guessIm a mashochist in having Shuichi only having problems but this is how it started with his legs giving out on occasion...now is a good time for him to be paralysed and need to have the surgery.....I guess Im just evil...but oh well...love your story...love your writing...catti
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Reviewed By: Flamula On: June 10, 2006 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is the mpreg I'm actually enjoying reading, very entertaining and with a touch of real life quite believable. Please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Ashcat not signed in On: June 07, 2006 15:34 CDT
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Chpt 10: Wow I really like how this story is shaping up! It is nice to just see them interacting around the death and just normal time together! Oh oh.. :) I have to admit I hope Shu is pregnant, you know Eiri can't ever keep his thing to himself --- you've never talked about birth control what do they use if any? Is that how they end up with so many kids? ;) hehehe I really hope you go through the whole pregnancy bit this time if you chose to go that route, in your other stories you seem to skip over the actual pregnant time and I"ve always missed it.. I think you would bring a thoughtful and realistic view to pregnancy, especially seeing how well you write them with their children! Thanks for updating and I'm sorry about your hd that does really suck!
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