| "A "Twisted" Cinderella Story" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: house bunny On: April 20, 2009 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the story please update soon please.
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Reviewed By: kyonkichi-luver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was pretty good, did u decide to discontinue it?
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooH please update soon.
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Reviewed By: inufanfan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 05:50 CDT
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yay its really good i cant wait to see more and hope naraku gets a giant kick in the balls with 3" heels =) update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: fullmetaldemon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 19:18 CDT
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OK, (stupid habbit i picked up, but back to the point)the summry realy got my attention and your story ROCKS (wait i... bad, the storys good sofar and telling the author boosts the confidence... great now i'm scarring myself). I'm being stupid but you should realy put out more chapters. TTFN, fullmetaldemon.
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Title: prologue?
Reviewed By: DarkKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 10:53 CDT
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it says story info and yet ther is none. well cept for:kagome-17. just to point it out
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Title: offer
Reviewed By: Kireshai-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 07:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okies... here's the scoop. You have good ideas. Your originality and creativity is great. But, your spelling and grammar is not good, as you've said. Now, if someone can't understand your fic, they're not going to enjoy it. I happen to have exceptional grammar.(I'm sorry if this is a bit boasty and stuff, but I need to get the point through.) And I'd be willing to beta that fanfic just so that I could enjoy it with proper grammar. So, please, let me know what you think. If you want to take me up on it, e-mail me at tomboi186@yahoo.com.au and I'll do it, after all, I have loads of free time on my hands.
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Reviewed By: Child_of _the_sun [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 00:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this story. update asap!
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Reviewed By: Dansu-Bijin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 17:06 CST
Comment/Review:
interesting..........tweak on a little grammar but otherwise i wanna here from this again asap!
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Reviewed By: angel_of_hope [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 12:23 CST
Comment/Review:
It was okay. You need to do some grammar work, but you have a great story line.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 19:16 CST
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please update asap!!! ^_^
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