| "Two Left Feet" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Ibitz On: June 29, 2015 00:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was hot and yet awkward, considering they're still teens. I
loved it it.
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Reviewed By: AKRei On: April 12, 2009 19:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved IT!!!!
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Reviewed By: QueenFool [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 10:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it was awesome!! u need to write more stories! cooly cooly story!!!!!!!!! anyway, i think Its..... AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ppiahh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 11:53 PST
Comment/Review:
hi, i'm sorry i don't quite understand what's going on here. So they give her a "dance lesson" but she's pretty close to being naked? how did she come to that state of undress? i re-read it trying to find clues as to how she got there but i couldn't find any. the beginning seems to be a bit rushed and why wouldn't she know the parts of the male anatomy. I'm not bashing your fic. the lemon was good but the characters seemed a little too OOC. haruhi would be alot more objective to that and at the very least hesitated about the idea. i jsut wanted the characters to.. well. stay in character. sorry again.
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Title: OMFG!
Reviewed By: Mad-Hatter [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 23:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE!! PLEASE KEEP GOING!! I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!!.....and I really want to know what she teaches them.... PS would you be mad if I edited this? It's nothing big just some small mistakes here and there? (like in the beginning you put we'll instead of well)
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Reviewed By: blooappall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 13:44 PST
Comment/Review:
Wow. Very nice indeedy. Lovely characterization of the twins; I can just see them doing something like that.
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Reviewed By: Twin_Souls [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 13:03 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kyaaaaaaah !!!!! I wish to be Haruhi =p I love your fics, you know it ^^ (especially your threesome) Onegai! write more fics HxHxK !!!! *huuuuugs* Atalia
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Reviewed By: Nimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 19:56 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic was so amazing, i hope you write another one.
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Reviewed By: Arashijo On: December 17, 2006 22:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! While having sex standing up seems a little too difficult, you've pulled it off perfectly!
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Reviewed By: psychokitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 20:57 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very clever. I LOVE IT!!!!! Please do more lemony H/H/K pairing fics.
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Reviewed By: Christi Morelei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 17:19 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great fic! Really nicely written, too. You've got an excellent handle on the H/H/K ship, and I hope you write more with them. :D
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Title: OMG!! I love it!!!
Reviewed By: Kitty BoBo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 11:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sooooo happy!! Somebody finally wrote a host club fic!! ^_^ i was great!!! OMG if i was any good i'd write it myself! U r the best! I love both your stories! Write some more! Encourage others to do the same! They were soooo awsome! You write so well, i've read some of your other stories too, mostly the inuyasha and fruits basket fics, love those too! keep it up! ^_^
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Reviewed By: passerby.. On: April 17, 2006 23:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bwahaha love the twins. thank god sumone got a fic out on em. but dam...mori-sempai is better. anyways good job. loved it
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Reviewed By: too lazy to log on On: March 19, 2006 22:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!! You read my mind XD So glad someone got the idea to make this fic. Any chance you would be making just a hikaru x harumi fic o_-As much as I love both twins....and tamaki XD almost forgot him. I like hikaru better. Never hurts to ask. Keep up the great work.
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