| "A Breeder's World" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2010 19:37 CDT
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Love this story, but very sad to see that you no longer work on it :( but still wanted to say its amazing
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Title: AWWW
Reviewed By: serenastar122189 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2010 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I have been following this story for a while, and am disapointed, that there still are not any updates on it. It is a great story, with a great story line. You leave so manythings unanswered. Who will Kagomes first pup be. will she have more than one? Whate with this priestest, how does her ball go, does she rise to the top? What is this new mysterius enemy. Who Are they. What will she do with the Jewl of Four Souls, and so on... Please write soon. And let me know when you update. My Email is angel_leutz@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2010 04:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In chapter 16 when you talk about rail way speeds up the top got me thinking and I looked up on Wikipedia fastest train and was sent to http : // en.wikipedia.org / wiki / High-speed_rail where in Kilometres the fastest speed is 574 km/h (France highest test run speed record) which is about 356.667 mph according to one site on the net. the funny thing is this reminds me of a anime called Bubblegum crisis 2040, where APPARENTLY they were riding the heavily modified motorbike (with 3 girls in armour) at, if I remember correctly 900 km/h...
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Title: gah
Reviewed By: serenastar122189 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wines whats gunna happen next write more soon i mean it
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome's gonna have puppies very soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is very cruel and evil... up dating when I am meant to be doing school work! oh well not like I didn't study for it on the weekend... so... Anyway That was another amazing update!!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 12:53 CDT
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I love it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Hollow_Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i found you fic by accident and relly liked it but was a mad that you have not updated for a long time and i wish to know what happens next. Also i hope that this will be a long fic that i can enjoy. and i bet others relly like this story and wish that you would put more cahpters up. hope to see more chapters in the futer!
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Reviewed By: cryptic91 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 10:51 CDT
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This is an awesome story, and so original. Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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Title: PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
Reviewed By: cerridwen_ereshkigal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 19:20 CDT
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**Begs** Please write more. You were updating so frequently when i got into the story and now your not and I just can't wait to find out what happens next! Thnx- Jo
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Reviewed By: ADarkNightsObsession [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It has the most original story line that I have ever read! Your spelling is great, your style of writing absolutely mind blowing, But most importantly......PLEEEEEASE! Update now? I've been checking everyday for about a month and stillllllllll...you haven't updated. Would you do it if i beg *gets on hands and knees* Please with sugar chocolates and jellybeans, and gummibears and all other manner of sweets on top, Will you update now please???? ...BTW... Seshomaru is HOT. Sorry...had to say that....
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Title: slvrdragon
Reviewed By: slvrdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this story. :D I hope you update it soon. The story is very original and unpredictable,your style is unique and i look forward to reading more fics by you
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Reviewed By: cryptic91 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 09:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great Story! I'm absolutely hooked! Please update soon, I want to read more! :)
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Title: I LOVE YOU!
Reviewed By: ADarkNightsObsession [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2006 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOU! you are quite possibley the most ingenious writer i have ever read! This story is so captivating that when i was on this last chapter i almost wanted to cry! I NEED MOOOOOOOOORE feed me my addiction please in liquid form so i can shoot it directly into my blood stream!
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Title: A Breeder's World
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2006 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Neko-Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your AU is interesting. 900 years instead of 500, so that let's you make up your own future technology. InuYasha has had a long time to get used to the idea of sharing a mate but was he always think it would be Kagome? She has enough love to go around I don't see her having a problem being with both demons. Who knows maybe even at the same time! The problem will be Inu. The reason I gave you an 8 on gramma is you need a proof reader! It is a common problem when proofing your own work to read what you think, not necessarily what is on the page. I found your story highly entertaining and captivating, I didn't get a lot of work done today because of it! Keep updating! Cheers! Neko-Lady
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Title: A Breeder's World
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: InuyahasChic [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 06:45 CST
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i luv da fic so far
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Title: A Breeder's World
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started to read this on ASS, and am really glad you brought it here, this is the place I mainly read from. I have you on faves' so now I'll know when you've updated, which I hope is soon.
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Title: A Breeder's World
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Kogas Hentai Luver [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 14:06 CST
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This is really interesting and different. I usually don't like fics that are so off from the original anime, but I like this. I'm a sci-fi nut so this fic kinda reminds me of that. I liked the Jetson's reference too. I'm really curious as to why Sess and Inu have their own statues at the front door. I'm looking forward to more. Nicely done. I think you've got a winner here ^_^
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