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| "Stakes and Gundams" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 10:15 CDT
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Huh. Awesome story. Now if only you'd update after a year, then this would be somethign worth watching. LAter
| Title: Aniversary of an Update
Reviewed By: SilverGreeneye [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really like this story. Heck, I find that I like all of your stories. That said, has the plot bunny for this fic died, or is it merely comatose? I would love to see more of it, but I understand that some ideas just don't return once they've gone. That's why I've got so many half-finished, unposted stories. Anyway, I just felt like it would be appropriate to review today since it's exactly one year from the day of the last update. Your stories are enjoyed.
| Reviewed By: Miststalker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please I need more of this story I can't wait to read more.
| Reviewed By: Oriya_Chan(Not Logged In) On: April 17, 2006 09:36 CDT
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This chapter seemed to go fast. I am not saying that it is a bad thing, but it was like you started reading it, and then, it was kinda over. There were more things you could have put more detail on, like when Xander went back to remove all of the 'weird' items around the apartment. You could have described what he found and what the body looked like. The conversation that Duo and Xander had at the end felt a little rushed to me, but I might be the only one. Besides those things, it is a really good story and it's comming along well. Can;t wait for the next chapter. Ja!
| Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2006 21:06 CST
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I am mad at myself for not giving your story justice with a longer post. I remember that I was in a big hurry that day, and so I am back after reading the last chapter. I am not 100% into BtVS, but even after I read this, I can get most of the things you are reffering to. You give good details on the little things that we're sapposed to know, but I am not sure what happened with Xander, or if it's just something you did to him to keep him alive for so long. I think the XanderxDuo pairing might be a little weird, considering that it's like an old man frenching a baby. (Yuch!) But that might just be me. I am really interested in this fic, and I am hoping that you will continue to update it. Hope to see you soon! Ja!
| Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 09:49 CST
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Sweet. This is an interesting fic, and I am eagerly awaiting to see where you're going with it. Post more please!
| Reviewed By: MirroredSakura [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 10:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've got to say, I was hesitant to read this. As a rule, I try to steer away from anime/live-action crossovers. This made me glad that I reconsidered. Quite nicely done, first out of the slew of badfic that I could find that was palatable. I look forward to your next chapter. ^_^
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