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| "When the World Goes Mad" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Nariel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 09:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Unsettling, highly unsettling. Aside that I hate the thought of Crawford having a wife.... he's my BDSM-slave, dangit! (^^; little joke here...) It's a very original idea, to write about them at the world ending. Wonder, what would I do?
| Reviewed By: KD Sarge nsi On: March 16, 2006 20:07 CST
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wow, very interesting! you certainly don't follow the beaten path with your plots. That's a good thing! Your characterization is great, (love that schu has an ugly green couch) and the visuals very moving. I agree with rq, though, the grammar mistakes are few but jarring. Just nit-picking, though, I think it's awesome that you can write such a great story outside your native language! (that was why I asked what language your books were--could NOT believe you weren't a native speaker. I thought you were an American living over there, but I didn't want to ask!)
| Reviewed By: red queen On: March 14, 2006 17:13 CST
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this was a really interesting piece. i really liked the imagery and the dialogue between schuldig and crawford, it's very well executed, except for a couple of very jarring grammatical errors that yanked me out of the story, especially schuldig's toast -- unless you meant for him to be using broken english, it would be 'to mankind!'not 'to the mankind!' a small detail, but very important, i think. if you'd like, i'd be glad to check your grammar before you post. :)
| Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: March 14, 2006 09:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! That was excellent. Well written and poignant without being trite.
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