| "Demonic Darkness and Sarrow" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Demonic Darkness and Sarrow
Reviewed By: Jonessa Salas On: August 09, 2006 05:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Chubby McFatass (inside joke) On: August 02, 2006 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I loved it. But you already knew that.... The ending was soooooooooo cute! *warm fuzzies* lol
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 15:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why would u just stop like dat! Come on, dats so mean, but I DO LUV IT! perty plllzzzzzz!!!lol
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Title: KEEP GOING
Reviewed By: yusuke_kagome_yoko_4ever_31 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2006 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz make a longer chapter. the suspence is literally killing me!
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Title: Pretty Good ^_^
Reviewed By: ShadowKitsune-sama On: March 20, 2006 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story, it was nice, but I find that most crossover stories usually happen like that, no offence or anything, this is my honest opinion.... They usually start off with a battle, a death or betrayal and then Kagome turns demon and her mom is one too, or she is not the really mother. If I count it up, I've read about 5 stories, almost identical to this one. And like I said this is my honest opinion. I did enjoy this however and you made little or no mistakes on each chapter, so your probably took sometime re-reading this which I appreciate. I hope you keep up the good work, and whether or not this is an original story, I enjoyed it, however I found it predictable....
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Title: Come On!
Reviewed By: This is Hieis_soulmateis_Kagome On: March 20, 2006 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Plz give a longer chapter. the suspence is literally killing me!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 10:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please! because I what to know what happens NEXT!
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Reviewed By: darkened_soul On: March 17, 2006 20:25 CST
Comment/Review:
your story is really good so far! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? i need to know!
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Reviewed By: gcdv (nli) On: March 15, 2006 18:50 CST
Comment/Review:
How can u jsut end it?! WAAA
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