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| "Coffee Stains and Dents in the Wall" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: a sinmple fan On: September 17, 2008 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. I love the way Heero know what is doing is wrong, he knpw that he his almost as bad as Duo and yet cannot help but trap Wufei. A read the author note, and you wanted to show that Wufei loved both of them. When I read them, I though that Wufei just think about them as friend. That why I think it was so terrible, the fact that both Duo and Heero wanted something, something that could save them for themselve, and in the end only Heero succeed in having what he want, and Duo got himself lock up for not having what he needed, and yet what Heero had to do what Trap Wufei, using his guilt. Because of Duo 'failure' he got the way to have what he wanted. He loved Wufei but not enough to let him go. But now I read that Wufei loved both of them, and so Wufei is maybe the one who suffer the more, seeing Heero all this time will mkae him realize what he had lost be refusing Duo Very good story
| Reviewed By: lunaseraph On: February 10, 2007 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of the best 1x5, or anything x5 fic I've ever read. Scratch that, one of the best Gundam Wing fics ever. My heart is swelling. ::glomps you: I believe we were separated at birth! ::stands beside you and shows you scar on hip where we were divided:: Exceptional work my friend.
| Reviewed By: jadethegirl On: March 24, 2006 14:28 CST
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i loved it! (i'm a sucker for wufei-centric fics really...) thanks for writing it! was a little sad, (ah, angst) but your A/N comforted me. lol. though i suppose i can understand there being a point to leaving wufei's side of it open-ended. write more (wufei) fics? please? :D
| Reviewed By: amiko 16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 13:20 CST
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Dark, but nice ^.^ Very realistic, Heero cracking under the pressure; and Duo, as well. I like exploring that side of the G-boys. (1x5= happy amiko ^__^)
| Reviewed By: imalive [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't help adore any person who writes Wufei yaoi, I love that boy. I even love this fic more because Wufei had two loves and one of them happened to be my fave pairing 1x5. Was this a one shot? It would've been great to see how everything led up to this fic I can only imagine the angst. Well it was great it even had me chokeing back some tears.
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