| "Egyptian Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 05:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: dragon of the west On: December 18, 2006 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome!!!!! this is the first fic I've read that accually has spanish you are VERY CREATIVE that is simply marveleous update soon you are certainly getting into my story favorites. Later!!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 01:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Yugi, even under Dartz influence he doesn't really want to hurt them. Poor Yami, I hope Yugi ends that torture for him and gets out of his dreams. Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 06:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope that the boys will not betray them. It seems Dartz has kept them as slave for his own evil purpose. Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 02:10 CDT
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Good chapter. Now they know their names. I wonder how long before the boys start the plan. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Nekosune! On: June 16, 2006 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! More yamyams if you update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 04:05 CDT
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Good chapter. I am assuming this is how he is getting the boys into Egypt. I don't think his plan will work once love takes over. They are not used to being treated with love and kindness. they will fall and fall hard.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 07:32 CDT
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I love this story. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 07:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really good. I enjoyed the prologue a lot.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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