Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: dropsofvenus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story. I found some grammar and punctuation mistakes along to way, so you might want toproof-read your story again. Other then that, very good. I look forward to the next chapter ^_^
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