Title: Here you go Reviewed By:Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 08:27 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: Okay, I hope you like constructive criticism because here comes some. The idea of the story is good and I like your interpretation of the characters. But since the story contains the Beyblade characters, it's not counted as a Original fic. More like continuation. Your style of writing is just fine but your text gets a bit blurry since you never switch row. A tip is to change row everytime someone says something. But though that I really like the story and I hope that you will continue on it.
