Reviewed By: Mirai_videl On: April 08, 2006 05:48 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey, not bad! I like your sense of humor, and I think you did a good job keeping Cell in character. Don't worry about the mary sue-ness. We've all been there and it's not even so bad in your story. Just don't let them magically kick Cell's ass by just blinking at him, or something like that ;) P.S. I hope Voyager will resque them!
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