Title: Woah...
Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 23:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very metaphysical. Where did you come up with the names? Makes me think of those sandman comics (never read them, but know of them). I have to say, you are very good. And just to let you know, I am probably one of the few that will ever read this story and immediately pick up on the fluidity of existence in your story and not be annoyed by the time jumps. Though, the Endless is not that good of a name for them. It implies that they shall always be. Even my own equivalent characters do not think so, even though the oldest hasn't aged since he turned 21, and that was Googol-Plex + 3 Googols + 23,000,369,462,730 Years ago (yeah, made him up before Final Fantasy 8 was released in america). They prefer to reference being outside time, which explains their survival despite the end of their home realities. Oh well. Keep up the good work. And oddly enough, I don't doubt that this wierd stuff would happen. The Goliath's Commandment - Our name is Goliath, and we are Legion
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