|"Vegrandis Magister Ferociter" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]|
| Reviewed By: Xlthanga [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 18:50 CST|
Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
I liked pretty much everything to do with this fic. Great pairing and use of characters. I vote for Li,Kisa and/or Illyasviel purely because ive watched these anime. BTW Li uses the sword all the way. Hope u write a sequel soon.
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 17:22 CDT|
Kewl.... my votes go to Li and.... Kisa.... with your suggestions about the tensions... and Li for well.... another magic user.... Sakura would also be there so yeah, it is a Two for One deal XD Sakura would be magic support, and Li could be direct atacker.... You forgot that he also uses a sword, but since i never watched the end of CCS I don't know weather or not he still uses it.... you have my votes!!!! Li and Kisa!
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 21:00 CDT|
Seriuosly, you gave a new twist to the countless I have read in the past..... In other words, you gave me a fresh outlook on the fics in this catagory. And you are seriously a good writer, but you kinda need to work on your spelling like for the word kneed, I'm not sure but I think you meant knelt. Other then that and a few other words, I give this fic a 9.8/10 and a place on my alltime favorites list. Well just a passing thought but can you continue this with a "time lapse"? You know what I mean right?, If you dont just email me or IM me. My data is on my "bio" page.... Well for now, SAYONARA!!! P.S. Where is Rebbeca from?