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| "Code Lyoko E65: Run, Run, Run" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Garfie2000 On: May 09, 2006 11:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
A fear I can see, she is going to die and well, I wouldn't want to die like that. Great Story.
| Reviewed By: DevinS On: March 21, 2006 23:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww, poor Yumi, and Ulrich, Xana is messing with them! BOO! Hey, join the forum and ask them to review your stories! I was going to but it says you have to ask, this way you get more reviews and you get ones from like, smart people who can write, unlike me.
| Title: SPELLING!
Reviewed By: Famouf Amof On: March 21, 2006 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spelling! You screwed up a few times, where/were. and to/too, but still enjoyable. I can see it though, Yumi is a year older then Ulrich, and if she feels she is going to die soon and she doesn't want to die like that, I don't want to give it away though, so leaving it at that.
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